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Sep 20, 2008 15:49 |  #1

One of the 1000 pictures i've made during my trip to spain. Not really into B&W, so I wanted to hear some critique.

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Sep 20, 2008 16:03 |  #2

I like it, I would probably remove the grafitti though!


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Sep 20, 2008 19:09 |  #3

good job! i really like the sharpness throughout the photo.


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Sep 20, 2008 19:58 |  #4

The image lacks a strong focal point. As photos of a building go it's fine, nice even, well exposed, but kinda boring overall. It's also too large to see on my screen all at once, you might like to make images a little smaller for posting on the web.


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Sep 22, 2008 16:04 as a reply to  @ tim's post |  #5

I think this is one case where a dramatic sky detracts from the image.


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Sep 22, 2008 16:07 |  #6

joedlh wrote in post #6359677 (external link)
I think this is one case where a dramatic sky detracts from the image.

I agree with this. I'm curious to see how it looks in color.




  
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Sep 22, 2008 20:22 |  #7

poppie guy wrote in post #6359701 (external link)
I agree with this. I'm curious to see how it looks in color.

the sky was added, because in the original image that part of the foto was overexposed.




  
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