92 Integra

So, I finally received my transmitter/receiver to finish up a super beginner strobist kit. It consists of a 430EX diffused through a white see-through umbrella.

It's only one flash, I already started ordering the gear for a second flash. These are just practice shots, basically learning where to setup the flashes, what settings to shoot ect etc etc...

I think if I would have setup the strobe a little more to the left, the pics would have came out better. Personally i really don't think they came out that bad being my first time shooting with off-camera flashes. So uuhh c&c away i guess...and thanks in advance.

I'm no expert but I think if you shot from further out (further away), the images might have more of a dramatic effect. Though it's tough since you have a black car.

The height from which you took the image doesn't seem flattering to the car, although I know you were primarily testing out your lighting.

You & sixsixfour have the same problem. See my posts in:
Acura TSX

PhotosGuy wrote in post #6363905
You & sixsixfour have the same problem. See my posts in:
Acura TSX

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aahh I see. Hotspots. Will make adjustment, waiting for second flash setup to get there, then I'll give it another try. Black cars are hard.

No, not hotspots. There are no good defining reflections in the body.
How does this grab you?It was shot in a parking lot. Read the links I gave you.