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Sep 23, 2008 18:49 |  #1

I really thought the high ISO would kill this image, but I'm satisfied. Any suggestions for improvement would be great. I didn't do any noise reduction, and although I'm sure it's there I can't see it on my monitor without peeping.

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Sep 23, 2008 19:01 |  #2

Looks good to me :-)


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Sep 23, 2008 19:07 |  #3

nice sharpness. however, i would bump up the exposure just a tad to brighten it up.


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Sep 23, 2008 19:20 |  #4

hecster wrote in post #6367984 (external link)
nice sharpness. however, i would bump up the exposure just a tad to brighten it up.

I like the darkground darker, but I did boost the exposure of the animal and like it better I think. Not drastic, but it stands out a bit more.

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Sep 23, 2008 19:23 |  #5

much better! :D


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Sep 23, 2008 19:32 |  #6

Very nice, and what a beautiful animal.


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Sep 23, 2008 19:36 |  #7

Looks way, way too blue to me. Here it is with white balance corrected (and a touch of sharpening)...

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Sep 23, 2008 19:51 as a reply to  @ swampler's post |  #8

Wow, I cannot believe I didn't see the blue hue. I'm losing it :lol:

I adjusted my second post above to reflect the change. I didn't apply the sharpening though as I'm happy with the unsharpened image.


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Sep 23, 2008 19:56 |  #9

TheSonofDarwin wrote in post #6368301 (external link)
Wow, I cannot believe I didn't see the blue hue. I'm losing it :lol:

I adjusted my second post above to reflect the change. I didn't apply the sharpening though as I'm happy with the unsharpened image.

Yours still looks a tad blue to me (look at the white fur), but much improved. I used the clidk WB in lightroom on my version on the white fur.


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Sep 23, 2008 20:01 |  #10

swampler wrote in post #6368339 (external link)
Yours still looks a tad blue to me (look at the white fur), but much improved. I used the clidk WB in lightroom on my version on the white fur.

Yeah I didn't use that fur as the white balance. It looks unnatural since the jaguar didn't have white white fur down :confused:

My original post looks exactly like how the cat looked at the zoo because of lack of sunlight. Yours looks like a freshly bathed cat :D. I tried to go somewhere in between of natural and ideal.


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Sep 23, 2008 20:09 |  #11

Good point. Nice job on the cat!


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Sep 23, 2008 21:12 |  #12

I would go tighter... background doesn't add that much. I would take some off the top and go to a traditional 8x10 form factor. The upper area isn't adding anything.




  
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