A few from my last shoot. She was awfully pretty to begin with so the rest was hard to mess up too bad.
C&C appreciated. The rest of the series is HERE
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ijohnson Goldmember  1,646 posts Joined Nov 2003 Location: Whiteriver, AZ More info | Sep 25, 2008 18:35 | #1 A few from my last shoot. She was awfully pretty to begin with so the rest was hard to mess up too bad. #2 #3 www.trickoflight.net
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CookieMonster Senior Member  344 posts Joined Apr 2005 Location: DETROIT, U.S.A. More info | Sep 25, 2008 18:54 | #2 |
Mikelangelo Goldmember  1,262 posts Likes: 14 Joined Nov 2005 Location: West Chicago, United States More info | Sep 25, 2008 19:03 | #3 Agree with Cookie Monster. #2 is really nice. I think #3 is almost as strong, but her right side is a little dark. --
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CheetaPita Goldmember  2,503 posts Likes: 3 Joined Apr 2007 Location: Louisiana More info | Sep 25, 2008 19:19 | #4 |
tacoma200 Member  203 posts Joined Sep 2008 Location: Southern KY More info | Sep 25, 2008 19:47 | #5 ijohnson, I don't see any major problems, good job. What I would change (coming from a novice) would be a shallower dept of field for a dreamy blurred background (bokeh), no doubt you have a couple of lenses that will do that very easily when opened up. Her head is very close to the top of the image on all 3 photo's. Is that on purpose? I prefer to give my self a bit more room above the head. If cropped for an 8x10 or something this could be a slights problem. But all this is just my personal preference. No doubt you're doing a great job! All of you guys and gals on this site are so good that it has helped renew my interest in portraits (Thanks!). Seeing how good others are gives me something to strive for. Relearning Portrait Photography
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SamHunter Senior Member  960 posts Likes: 2 Joined Apr 2008 Location: Louisville, KY More info | Sep 25, 2008 19:50 | #6 She's very pretty... makes me jealous I can't find girls like this to snap. Louisville, Kentucky Wedding and Portrait Photography
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JMHPhotography Goldmember  4,784 posts Likes: 1 Joined May 2005 Location: New Hampshire More info | Sep 25, 2008 20:14 | #7 Nice work... she's very pretty. I know how easy it is to photograph pretty girls, but I also know how hard it can be too, so good job. My personal pick of these three is number 2. I do like them all, but I'm really diggin' the connection in number 2. ~John
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Anke "that rump shot is just adorable" UK SE Photographer of the Year 2009  30,454 posts Likes: 3 Joined Oct 2006 Location: Royal Tunbridge Wells, UK More info | Sep 25, 2008 20:20 | #8 Nice natural looking series. I bet she likes them. Anke
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop  More info | Sep 25, 2008 20:45 | #9 She definitely has a mischievous sparkle to her eyes and smile. Lovely young lady and you did a great job capturing her. Dave
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Zazoh Goldmember  1,129 posts Joined Mar 2008 Location: MICO - Texas More info | Sep 25, 2008 21:34 | #10 Great work. I'm a fan of tight crop and #2 I'd do as just a head shot, the bit of the leg we are seeing isn't adding to the image. A Camera - A Lens -- Gear Doesn't Matter
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Sep 25, 2008 21:36 | #11 Zazoh wrote in post #6382207 Great work. I'm a fan of tight crop and #2 I'd do as just a head shot, the bit of the leg we are seeing isn't adding to the image. Hey Dave, this is the 4th brickwall I've seen today. Since you mentioned it yesterday, seeing it more today.
Dave
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JMHPhotography Goldmember 4,784 posts Likes: 1 Joined May 2005 Location: New Hampshire More info | Sep 25, 2008 21:50 | #12 Zazoh wrote in post #6382207 Great work. I'm a fan of tight crop and #2 I'd do as just a head shot, the bit of the leg we are seeing isn't adding to the image. Hey Dave, this is the 4th brickwall I've seen today. Since you mentioned it yesterday, seeing it more today. hehe... I did a senior shoot this past weekend and not a single brick walls in site. I felt lost and confused. "What am I to do now?" haha.. not really. ~John
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WMDunkin Senior Member  276 posts Joined Jun 2008 Location: MD, USA More info | Sep 25, 2008 21:57 | #13 i love it when girls get that half smile she has in the first two. nice series. Canon G9; 250D, LAH-DC20 Hood, WC-DC58B, LA-DC58H
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wile_e_coyote_n_taz Senior Member  538 posts Joined Feb 2007 Location: Mentor, OH More info | #2 has my vote....Very nice... When life hands you lemons: add tequila and salt!
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Jbs Senior Member 762 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jan 2008 Location: Los Angeles More info | Sep 25, 2008 23:34 | #15 shes hot... lol nice pictures too, i like #2 the most. Website - johnbattephotography.com
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