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Oct 07, 2008 12:56 |  #1

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Oct 07, 2008 12:58 |  #2

I think the first one is good...


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Oct 07, 2008 14:26 |  #3

canonnoob wrote in post #6453952 (external link)
I think the first one is good...

you mean good for newbie or just good ?
anyway, I'm pretty sure I've made some mistakes, just want to make it clear




  
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Oct 07, 2008 14:28 |  #4

edit.: sorry just an idiot remark lol... couldnt see clearly i guess :lol:


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Oct 07, 2008 16:04 as a reply to  @ canonnoob's post |  #5

I like the second shot, the colors are really nice, the reflection is super.

Self portraits are a hard one!!! Keep snapping and you will get there..You have fabulous eyes;)


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Oct 07, 2008 16:05 |  #6

BTW welcome to POTN!


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Oct 07, 2008 19:54 |  #7

The first one does not interest me much but,

the second one is great. It looks like something that would be in Architectural digest. For several reasons. The colors are great, you didn't do anything there except print them using a color balance that looked great. You'd be surprised how many people can't seem to do that simple thing.

You took it from a good location.

You took it in a state that we are not used to seeing it and you pointed that out. It's a mall. We are used to seeing malls or open buildings like that full of people.

Great going!



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Oct 07, 2008 20:00 as a reply to  @ canonnoob's post |  #8

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I like the lighting technique in the first image. It generates a really nice modeling effect. I'm not a fan of over-crop. Over-cropped photos remind me too much of the errors I've made in the old days from not allowing for the parallex in my old yasicha reflex view finder. I can't escape the subconscious reflex notion that it's a blunder.


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Oct 08, 2008 12:53 |  #9

Thanks for your replies.
I'll go on and try it then... :)




  
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Oct 08, 2008 18:46 |  #10

The processing on the first one makes your face look 2-dimensional....it looks like a picture of a very detailed cardboard cutout.

The colors are nice in the 2nd one (very warm), but the compostion is uninteresting to me.




  
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Oct 10, 2008 13:05 |  #11

nw85887 wrote in post #6462425 (external link)
The processing on the first one makes your face look 2-dimensional....it looks like a picture of a very detailed cardboard cutout.

interesting comparison :)




  
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