C&C please!

would like to know what you guys think of this picture. what you like and what you dont like please?

I think it needs some pop and I am sure you probably can't do a lot about it, but the smaller building to camera right is distracting to me. I think the shot would be exciting without it. Great concept, however.

thanks ill try something different next time.

here is one that rotated and cropped out the smaller building.

Good work, now add some pop.

Mike McCusker wrote in post #6472979
Good work, now add some pop.

For my own knowledge, what does "add some pop" mean for this picture?

If you post process, use some levels/curves adjustments.

My 2 cents .... instead of pop - why not try to capture with the sun adding shadows and additional sharp lines.

interesting concept/shot and i like the second version better than the first. I would include more sky.
I'm wondering if you crop to more of the rule of thirds may help.

What does it look like in B&W? This would take away the blue and our eyes would pay more attention to the shapes of the building.