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Oct 17, 2008 13:25 |  #1

Hello! Wanted to get some opinions on this one. Is the background too distracting? Is it too overexposed? Does it even work??? If so, what could be improved. Thanks so much!

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Oct 17, 2008 13:57 |  #2

Fascinating - I like it. The background is sufficiently over powered by the subject that it's not distracting to me. It would add if the BG were recognizable. Perhaps a bit lower exposure on the sun? Good idea, good execution.


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Oct 17, 2008 14:12 |  #3

It definitely works, but agree that the lighting is a little too strong. More of the flower, less of the sun, and it's perfect.


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Oct 18, 2008 09:48 |  #4

Thanks so much! I appreciate the advice! I'll give it another go before it gets too cold. :)


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Oct 18, 2008 10:57 |  #5

I like it; but I think a more level bg would be better - not perfectly level though - I'd take down the bump on the left and the big rise on the right.


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Oct 18, 2008 11:11 as a reply to  @ SwingBopper's post |  #6

Good idea, seen it before, but that's ok.
It's really tricky to get the exposure right so you can see more of the plant.

Might be better with PP.


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Oct 18, 2008 11:36 as a reply to  @ chauncey's post |  #7

Sweet concept!


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Oct 19, 2008 00:01 |  #8

i wish I would have thought of that! its cool nice work!


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Oct 19, 2008 11:14 |  #9

Compositionally its a good picture and has nice colors; maybe a bit cliche though...I've seen similar compositions many times before.




  
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Oct 19, 2008 14:17 |  #10

it's nice !!. But I think it is a little bit overexposed




  
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