This is my first post on this forum, and I was looking for some brutal CC. It seems everywhere I go people are so nancy-ish about critiquing photos. Tear it apart please.
JuiceBox Senior Member 495 posts Joined Oct 2008 Location: New Jersey More info | Oct 25, 2008 12:29 | #1 This is my first post on this forum, and I was looking for some brutal CC. It seems everywhere I go people are so nancy-ish about critiquing photos. Tear it apart please. Nikon D300s -- Nikkor 24mm F/2.8 -- Nikkor 28-80mm F/3.3-5.6 -- Nikkor 135mm F/2.8 -- Sigma 70-300mm F/4-5.6flickr
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | Oct 25, 2008 12:44 | #2 I would love to see a crop from the bottom, letting more of the border collie show up! A tad bit of levels in light will bring him forward instead of blending in the Bg.but really.that way it is, you caught the dog at his best! you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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Majortom212 Member 41 posts Joined Sep 2008 Location: Michigan More info | Oct 25, 2008 12:49 | #3 Welcome .over easy.
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PictureNorthCarolina Gaaaaa! DOH!! Oops! 9,318 posts Likes: 248 Joined Apr 2006 Location: North Carolina More info | Oct 25, 2008 12:50 | #4 Welcome to POTN! The image is crisp, clean and nice, albeit somewhat contrasty. Website
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | I disagree about the cropping of the stump.only because there is enough of the height left behind the dog to create a "grounding", plus there are trees in behind him showing his setting? you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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Majortom212 Member 41 posts Joined Sep 2008 Location: Michigan More info | Oct 25, 2008 13:14 | #6 CannedHeat wrote in post #6558898 Welcome to POTN! The image is crisp, clean and nice, albeit somewhat contrasty. However, I think the dog blends into the background a little too much. The right side of the dog's head almost blends into the background trees. It's hard to tell where one ends and the other begins. I would disagree with cropping the bottom, tho. By showing the bottom, the stump is "grounded." It's an old oil painting tip as I understand it. Cropping up would produce a partial stump, floating with no "grounding" into the scene. Keep shooting, keep posting. I didn't think of it that way, but it makes perfect sense. .over easy.
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scslmd Member 141 posts Joined Sep 2008 More info | Oct 25, 2008 13:26 | #7 First impression, sharp, good boken, really isolates and accentuates the subject(s). The dog has a great expression and the texture of the bark is very nice. 5D2, 40D+BG-E2, Tamron 28-75 f/2.8, EF-S 17-55mm (kit), EF 28-135mm, EF 17-40 f/4, EF 24-70 f/2.8, EF 70-200 f/2.8 IS, 430EX, 580EX II
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SlowBlink "I like dog butts" 1,926 posts Joined Dec 2007 Location: Vancouver B.C. More info | Oct 25, 2008 13:38 | #8 The legs are too short and his/her tongue is hanging out. Rob
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midnitejam Senior Member 806 posts Joined Jul 2006 Location: Parma Ohio More info | In General, Black-and-Whites do not impress me, but this is a definite keeper. I like it very much. Midnitejam--The happiness in your life depends on the quality of your thoughts.
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Oct 25, 2008 15:04 | #10 Thanks guys. The bokeh is actually fake; it's a gaussian blur effect after separating the stump and the dog (SHE is an Australian Shepherd btw Nikon D300s -- Nikkor 24mm F/2.8 -- Nikkor 28-80mm F/3.3-5.6 -- Nikkor 135mm F/2.8 -- Sigma 70-300mm F/4-5.6flickr
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midnitejam Senior Member 806 posts Joined Jul 2006 Location: Parma Ohio More info | Oct 25, 2008 16:13 | #11 JuiceBox wrote in post #6559587 . I'm surprised no one mentioned where this photo came from when looking at the exif :P.
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WalczakPhoto Goldmember 1,034 posts Joined Apr 2008 More info | Oct 26, 2008 00:17 | #12 Well, first and foremost I have to agree with the general consensus here about the crop...you really need to decide "what" this photo is about. If it's about the tree stump, then the dog shouldn't be in the shot at all but if it's about the dog then the framing/crop should be much tighter. "It is horrifying that we have to fight our own government to save the environment. " - Ansel Adams
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Oct 26, 2008 00:26 | #13 That's exactly the type of response I was looking for. Thank you very much. Nikon D300s -- Nikkor 24mm F/2.8 -- Nikkor 28-80mm F/3.3-5.6 -- Nikkor 135mm F/2.8 -- Sigma 70-300mm F/4-5.6flickr
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SwingBopper Goldmember 2,664 posts Likes: 3 Joined Oct 2007 Location: Japan More info | Oct 26, 2008 06:39 | #14 Nice technical work but my first impression is where does the dog end and the stump begin - the dog's head blends into the stump. It's a lovely animal, try for some motion blur shots with him running and jumping as he seems ready to do at any minute. EOS 5D II, 40D, Sony R1, Olympus 1030, Canon S5-IS.
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Oct 26, 2008 09:14 | #15 SwingBopper wrote in post #6562722 Nice technical work but my first impression is where does the dog end and the stump begin - the dog's head blends into the stump. It's a lovely animal, try for some motion blur shots with him running and jumping as he seems ready to do at any minute. I've wanted to do that for quite some time; sadly, I don't have any ND filters yet Nikon D300s -- Nikkor 24mm F/2.8 -- Nikkor 28-80mm F/3.3-5.6 -- Nikkor 135mm F/2.8 -- Sigma 70-300mm F/4-5.6flickr
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