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Oct 26, 2008 02:28 |  #1

My wifes cousin just was married and I shot these with the 40d and 100mm macro.
What do you think and what could have been better. I did not pose them and was the 2nd shooter. these have not been processed in any way, I will remove the blue tint from the outdoor shots and red from the inside shot.

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Oct 26, 2008 02:47 |  #2

If I could chime in, I think you could do some PP on the hot spots on the bride's cheeks and the groom's forehead.

The jet shots... I think the color looks a little flat. There's a potential though.




  
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Oct 26, 2008 12:15 |  #3

Thank you Brulee (one of my personal favorite desserts), the jet shots were JPEGs and shot at 1/4 mi. and the air was hazy making everything flat. I ended up with over 250 shots in the show.


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Oct 26, 2008 12:16 |  #4

If you check some curves and contrast they all could look better, composition looks nice. Did you sharpen these at all?


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Oct 26, 2008 20:50 |  #5

Other than rotation and cropping,I did nothing. I figured everyone could rip them apart and then I could figure out how to be better and produce something worthy.


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Oct 27, 2008 16:22 |  #6

I would say use a little fill flash for the bride and groom... :) welcome


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Oct 28, 2008 18:09 |  #7

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I would say use a little fill flash for the bride and groom... :) welcome

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Oct 28, 2008 18:30 |  #8

same here , a little punch / contrast , and fill flash nice one of the bride


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