Hi all,
I have messing with this for a while.What do you reckon to it?
daveyboy123 Senior Member 432 posts Joined Jan 2007 Location: Teignmouth,Devon,England More info | Oct 26, 2008 16:20 | #1 Hi all, http://www.davechamberlain.smugmug.com
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Oct 26, 2008 16:30 | #2 I like it, maybe a little less blur. The things you do for yourself die with you, the things you do for others live forever.
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daveyboy123 THREAD STARTER Senior Member 432 posts Joined Jan 2007 Location: Teignmouth,Devon,England More info | Thanks chauncey.More comments would be appreciated http://www.davechamberlain.smugmug.com
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Broncobear Goldmember 2,415 posts Joined Oct 2006 Location: Ottawa Ontario Canada More info | Oct 27, 2008 15:28 | #4 I wouldn't blur the forground. Less blur on top. "The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes, but in having new eyes." "
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heycow Senior Member 771 posts Joined Sep 2005 Location: Oakland, CA More info | Oct 27, 2008 15:35 | #5 Well, I'd either blur the whole thing LESS, or blur the whole thing MORE. I think it's the contrast between the sharp middle and blurred outside that's a bit off. I like the blur at the top, and would like to see it applied to the whole image to see if it works. Might make it pretty cool and abstract, almost like a painting. Hello, my name is BEN
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daveyboy123 THREAD STARTER Senior Member 432 posts Joined Jan 2007 Location: Teignmouth,Devon,England More info | Thanks guys.This is the latest version... http://www.davechamberlain.smugmug.com
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SwingBopper Goldmember 2,664 posts Likes: 3 Joined Oct 2007 Location: Japan More info | Oct 27, 2008 20:17 | #7 I like the 2nd; but Is the person cloned into this photo? In both it looks that way and I think blurring some around the perimeter of the person might help. EOS 5D II, 40D, Sony R1, Olympus 1030, Canon S5-IS.
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daveyboy123 THREAD STARTER Senior Member 432 posts Joined Jan 2007 Location: Teignmouth,Devon,England More info | Thanks everyone,you have been very helpful.Here is my final attempt for now....any better? http://www.davechamberlain.smugmug.com
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spooch Member 84 posts Likes: 2 Joined Aug 2008 Location: Zagreb, Croatia More info | Oct 28, 2008 16:38 | #9 #1 is the best.maybe a little less light. i would like to know how did you do it??? Photo gallery
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SwingBopper Goldmember 2,664 posts Likes: 3 Joined Oct 2007 Location: Japan More info | Yep. That last one does it for me. It's very well done. It's a keeper! EOS 5D II, 40D, Sony R1, Olympus 1030, Canon S5-IS.
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daveyboy123 THREAD STARTER Senior Member 432 posts Joined Jan 2007 Location: Teignmouth,Devon,England More info | Oct 29, 2008 13:14 | #11 |
Jimconnerphoto Goldmember More info | Oct 29, 2008 18:12 | #12 for me I think this would make a great horizontal or even square crop. There is a lot of dead space. Wedding and Portraits www.jimconnerphoto.com
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Nikolas Goldmember 1,720 posts Likes: 7 Joined May 2005 Location: Melbourne, Australia More info | Oct 29, 2008 18:20 | #13 Rather than blur the outside I'd make a whitish transparent vignette to give it the appearance of a white light tunnel. Canon 5D2 20D & 300D 50mm f1.8 mk 2, 24-105 f4 IS L
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