my 1st studio shot

Hi Guys,

i did my 1st studio portraits about 2 weeks back..and am pretty please with the result. it would be good if i could get some C&C on how to improve.
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Love them all - #4 is the best of the lot though

thanks..its my fav too..
just to add..i may have over used the lightings available.. i had bout 4 softboxes and 1 beauty dish..certain shots only used 2 softbox and 1 beauty dish..it was really trick when the model was having her shades on..the reflection of the softboxes are often seen on it..any tips on how to prevent such event from happening?

You have a gorgeous model here! Just a couple of things I noticed...

1. I would have had the fan blowing her hair the opposite direction, kept it out of her face for this shot.

2. It's an ok shot, I probably would have had the model tilt her head down into the frame more. Just having the bottom of her head is distracting to me.

3. Doesn't do anything for me. I would clone out the light reflection in her glasses.

4. The best of the lot and my favorite as well!

5. I really like this one as well, nice and clean good conversion

6. She's a gorgeous young lady, I would have tightened up on here a little on this one.

7. Nice pose, I would have scooted her a little more forward so that the bottom hem of her skirt was showing under her legs, plus that way you don't get the dreaded thigh bulge!

8. Nice shot, I love the look she has here.

Overall, your lighting is terrific; no hotspots and very even. I would love to see more!

thanks sidx001
mind if i explain a lil..
1. we did 2 shots..1 with the fan blowing opposite n 1 infront of her..she seem to like this 1 more somehow, so i posted it for some comment

2. was meant to just take her lips and the shoes, but was my mistake to have not frame the picture better.

3. not too sure how to clone :P

otherwise..thanks for the good comment ..will remember what you told me for future improvements..thanks