A girl, a feather and a swan....plz c&c

here are few shots from last weekend and i would like to hear some c&c from you. THX


#1 A girl

Aside from #1 (no idea how to judge B&W) they look a little dark to me... especially the swan. Looks a little soft on it's back also.

I like the 2nd one (feather) but it would have been better if you were able to remove the stain on the upper left part to make the background all black. Also the first pic, it makes me curious on what she's looking at. For me, it looks like there was supposed to be 2 subjects but the other one was cropped out. It just feels like something is missing.

thx for c&c so far. I have just noticed the stain on #2 and i'll try to remove it. #1 wasn't croped at all. I tried to capture the curious look she had atm but she wasn't looking at nothing special. It also seams I have great problems with my screen cause they didn't look dark when I Postprocessed them but when I was looking them on my friends computer earlier this evening i noticed that they are darker then they are suppose to be. I think that i'll have to buy my self a new screen
Thx 4 c&c, i'll try to correct this problems next time.
also looking foward to hear more C&C