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Oct 29, 2008 12:35 |  #1

Post processing in CS3. Levels/curves, masks, BW conversion, USM , framing.
CC would be much appreciated.

Shot in natural light conditions.

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Oct 29, 2008 14:28 |  #2

I like the shot but the skin (face and hands) seem to be a little to dark for my taste. Can we see the color version?


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Oct 29, 2008 21:08 |  #3

I like it just as it is. Good tonal range and an excellent candid portrait.


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Oct 30, 2008 00:09 |  #4

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Oct 30, 2008 03:05 |  #5

Thank you very much for the comments :)


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Oct 30, 2008 03:12 |  #6

hurley1718 wrote in post #6585484 (external link)
I like the shot but the skin (face and hands) seem to be a little to dark for my taste. Can we see the color version?

Colour :

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I love the colours in the image, the problem, however is that, with the colour version, the hand in the background seems to distract my attention a lot... The B&W version lets me focus on the subject and everything about him. The overall depth of the scene that I tried to capture. Is it just me, or does anyone agree with this?

Thanks again for viewing. :)

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Oct 30, 2008 06:42 |  #7

Great portrait!

I definitely prefer the B/W version, and for the exact reasons you mentioned. It does make the subject stand out much more, making it the clear center of attention.

Maybe you could try darkening the hand in the background a bit more, and lightening the skin of the subject through tweaking the channels in the B/W conversion?


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Oct 30, 2008 12:11 |  #8

I like them both with maybe the B&W leading more becuase of personal preference. nice job


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Oct 30, 2008 18:49 |  #9

Your right about the hand. I really didn't notice it in the B&W conversion but it does stand out in the color one. Bummer. The colors are very nice. I was looking to see if you could clone out the hand a bit but it makes the background a bit strange. If you are able to shoot this type of photo again I'd say go for it and hopefully the background will be free of obstructions.


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Oct 30, 2008 21:35 |  #10

mi_reefy wrote in post #6589413 (external link)
Colour :

I love the colours in the image, the problem, however is that, with the colour version, the hand in the background seems to distract my attention a lot... The B&W version lets me focus on the subject and everything about him. The overall depth of the scene that I tried to capture. Is it just me, or does anyone agree with this?

Thanks again for viewing. :)

To me, the B &W version becomes an icon or abstraction, whereas with the color version he is actually breathing.


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Nov 01, 2008 02:05 |  #11

GinoE wrote in post #6589969 (external link)
Great portrait!

I definitely prefer the B/W version, and for the exact reasons you mentioned. It does make the subject stand out much more, making it the clear center of attention.

Maybe you could try darkening the hand in the background a bit more, and lightening the skin of the subject through tweaking the channels in the B/W conversion?

Thanks a lot :) I did try that, not much luck though, as much as I tried to carefully push the processing further, it seemed to take away more from the original image...

Thanks again though. Much appreciated.

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I like them both with maybe the B&W leading more becuase of personal preference. nice job

Thanks a lot! :)

hurley1718 wrote in post #6594138 (external link)
Your right about the hand. I really didn't notice it in the B&W conversion but it does stand out in the color one. Bummer. The colors are very nice. I was looking to see if you could clone out the hand a bit but it makes the background a bit strange. If you are able to shoot this type of photo again I'd say go for it and hopefully the background will be free of obstructions.

I would most definitely go back! Not sure I'd find the same man, though. These places though,, It's very interesting. One just gets lost in observation... (Nepal, btw)

I did try cloning out too. I'm sure its possible, but I'm not good enough for that sort of major cloning work yet.

Thanks for dropping by again :)

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To me, the B &W version becomes an icon or abstraction, whereas with the color version he is actually breathing.

Now that it has been mentioned, I can't agree more... Perfect observation, and thank you. I wish I would see things like you do one day :). Thank you very much for the carefully thought comments.

Much appreciated :).

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Nov 01, 2008 18:42 as a reply to  @ mi_reefy's post |  #12

I really don't have anything to say that hasn't yet been said. I just want to say great job, I love it. It is just a tiny bit dark generally speaking but it works well for this particular image because it adds to the mood.
I am looking forward to seeing more of your work!




  
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Nov 02, 2008 05:17 |  #13

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I am looking forward to seeing more of your work!

Thanks MilenaMN, Looking forward to showing you more :)


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