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Nov 01, 2008 16:59 |  #1

C&C wanted for this photo. I shot it yesterday afternoon in my back yard. I used a 2'x3' fotodiox diffuser panel to soften the harsh sun light. I also tried to keep the rule-of-thirds in mind for composition. What do you all think?


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Nov 01, 2008 17:02 |  #2

The full-sized photo is tack-sharp. For some reason it doesn't seem to be online.


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Nov 01, 2008 20:46 |  #3

my eye is drawn towards the hole, so the rule of thirds seems a little off to me

i would have framed it very slightly differently with the blue lines. notice the hole is lined up with the bottom third (blue), instead of slightly above the red line


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Nov 01, 2008 21:37 |  #4

I think you did quite well in every respect, except interest. A bird would have improved upon that, greatly.

Your treatment for softening the harsh sunlight was quite effective.

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Nov 01, 2008 22:09 |  #5

I agree, it does lack the interest.


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Nov 02, 2008 14:03 as a reply to  @ SamClarkPhotography's post |  #6

If the bird box would have had sharper focus to capture a lot of texture, the rule of thirds wouldn't have been so important.


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