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Nov 03, 2008 11:45 |  #1

Took some of my friend yesterday by the river in town. Let me know what I need to work on, anything and everything, thanks!

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Nov 03, 2008 11:47 |  #2

i really like 2, 4 and 6 - no critique from me though as i don't think i am very qualified ;)


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Nov 03, 2008 11:52 |  #3

Very nice. I think these look good. Pretty model too




  
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Nov 03, 2008 12:36 |  #4

Very nice. I like the setting/location and they are well done. #1 her face looks a little soft or a little of in WB something just seems a bit off there to me.


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Nov 03, 2008 13:44 |  #5

I think you chose some excellent locations for these shots and the model is very well posed. I don't think you need to work on anything, you're already there!


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Nov 03, 2008 13:47 |  #6

Gorgeous looking model/friend, well posed and lite. You did awesome!!




  
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Nov 03, 2008 13:50 |  #7

all good...
last one is the best...
btw, finally a teenager with shoes and no flip flops :)
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Nov 03, 2008 14:02 |  #8

I like 5 the best, although it would have been nice with a little more space around the top. The first one is also great.


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Nov 03, 2008 14:09 |  #9

I think you did very well with the angles and composition. You could add a bit more contrast for a little pop to the final image but YMMV. If she did her own hair/makeup, she did very well to keep it neat and tidy. nicely done by both of you.


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Nov 03, 2008 14:36 |  #10

#3 is def. the best. Good work on all of them.



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Nov 03, 2008 20:27 |  #11

Very good.
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Nov 03, 2008 21:54 |  #12

I like the last one the best...her face seems brighter in this one than in some of the others...and she seems to stand out more...nice job


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Nov 04, 2008 23:21 |  #13

I like the one where she is smiling the best.




  
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Nov 05, 2008 04:44 as a reply to  @ reefergal's post |  #14
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There was something about #3 I really liked. I did a short edit. Mostly just messed with the saturation and a touch of noise reduction. Here's a before and after shot.


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