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Nov 06, 2008 20:01 |  #1

I did'nt take these. I just did the retouch for another photographer. Let me know what you think

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Nov 06, 2008 20:35 |  #2

all four of them just show up as a McAfee logo for some reason


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Nov 06, 2008 21:06 |  #3

Thats are some of the best retouching I've seen. Very nice. Would love to have instructions on how you go about it.




  
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Nov 06, 2008 21:09 |  #4

HQP wrote in post #6638715 (external link)
Thats are some of the best retouching I've seen. Very nice. Would love to have instructions on how you go about it.

Thanks. Its a combination of healing brush, the liquify tool, and my favorite, D&B




  
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Nov 06, 2008 21:11 |  #5

Nice stuff, I would try to get rid of the blood red eye veins in the first.


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Nov 06, 2008 22:28 |  #6

was there anything to retouch? haha..

Great job.


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Nov 06, 2008 23:14 |  #7

Very nice job!!

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Nov 07, 2008 07:48 |  #8

Maybe it's just me, but, I think they go too far. There is a unreal feeling to them. I can't imagine the model liking them or wanting to show them as a photo of her.

Now having said that, if the purpose of modifying them was to fill the need for a photograph of a perfect person then you have done very well. I am totally amazed at what you are able to do the these photos!

So while they don't trip my switch, I bow to the King!



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Nov 07, 2008 10:58 as a reply to  @ acchildress's post |  #9

I think you've done a good job on these.

I do think you need to work on the mouth of the first one. By pulling the corners of her mouth down, she appears to have a very strong underbite in that shot. I find it hard to look at the rest of her face because I'm drawn to that feature too much.


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Nov 07, 2008 11:36 |  #10

i absolutely love the editing that you did great job.


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Nov 07, 2008 11:42 |  #11

wow, this is professional stuff!!!


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Nov 07, 2008 11:46 |  #12

I think the originals are MUCH better. I do think the lighting is a little flat.
Great focus and make-up, the model is beautiful. (Hint: Tilt your head down :) )
One thing has happened with digital, we don't use filters on our lenses anymore, and I think the look we're seeking, suffers.
The edits make her look like a plastic doll.
I see a lot of this style lately, but I don't care for the look.


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Nov 07, 2008 13:10 as a reply to  @ DAMphyne's post |  #13

Amazing Job!



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Nov 07, 2008 14:06 |  #14

Nice work. I don't know what you're going for, so I don't know if you got it or not. Frankly, they're "too perfect" for me.

And, her hair in the second one is too abrupt in the retouch... on the viewer's left side. Too much is cut off.

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Nov 07, 2008 17:59 |  #15

I love your PP job... As good as it gets for me anyways :P


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