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Nov 06, 2008 20:09 |  #1

Just want some critique on these, i cant reshoot them sadly :/ So i have to do/improve the shots i have. Im not sure if i like these or not..
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Nov 06, 2008 20:12 |  #2

I like the first one. Second one seems a little orange. If you have PS, add a cyan photo filter layer to correct the skin tone




  
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Nov 06, 2008 20:31 |  #3

Something about her left eye in the 2nd one looks a bit unreal, overprocessed. It may be lighter naturally but it doesn't look that way.


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Nov 06, 2008 21:11 |  #4
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Very interesting shots - i like them both. First one's a little hot directly on her face, but workable. agree second one is a bit orange.


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Nov 07, 2008 02:35 |  #5

Both very interesting and unusual shots because of the expressions. Turn image editing on and you'll probably get some different takes on editing. I'd play with B&W for #2. Her eyes look OK to me.


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Nov 07, 2008 03:30 |  #6

# 1 is really good but i would croop it a bit to loose the lower part of the photo


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Nov 07, 2008 11:20 as a reply to  @ spooch's post |  #7

Unusual and I like them.


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Nov 07, 2008 11:25 |  #8

I like them both, though i am not keen on the peeling paint on the first, but really good all the same




  
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Nov 07, 2008 11:45 as a reply to  @ mickdo100's post |  #9

I played around with the second image in photoshop and will post it here if it's ok with you. Just turn on "image editing Ok" in your profile ;)



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Nov 07, 2008 15:21 |  #10

Interesting background on the first one, not really liking the second one.


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Nov 07, 2008 15:34 |  #11

Image editing turned on now.
Play around :)


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Nov 07, 2008 16:13 as a reply to  @ betebete's post |  #12

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I like the second one. Very pretty model and she looks legitimately pissed about something...lol


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Nov 07, 2008 16:59 |  #13

Not to be crude... and maybe I've yet to mature... but in the second picture, I can't resist but look down her blouse. It's a bit distracting, although the point of interest is supposed to be her expression.


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Nov 07, 2008 17:57 |  #14

I like the edit on the second one. I think in the original #2 the eyes were re-touched a bit too much for my taste, they look like she was wearing contacts :)


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Nov 25, 2008 18:30 |  #15

#2 looks like it really hurts..but I like it..cool


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