Girl and Girl

Just want some critique on these, i cant reshoot them sadly :/ So i have to do/improve the shots i have. Im not sure if i like these or not..
Used 430ex flash.


Katrine:

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I like the first one. Second one seems a little orange. If you have PS, add a cyan photo filter layer to correct the skin tone

Something about her left eye in the 2nd one looks a bit unreal, overprocessed. It may be lighter naturally but it doesn't look that way.

Very interesting shots - i like them both. First one's a little hot directly on her face, but workable. agree second one is a bit orange.

Both very interesting and unusual shots because of the expressions. Turn image editing on and you'll probably get some different takes on editing. I'd play with B&W for #2. Her eyes look OK to me.

# 1 is really good but i would croop it a bit to loose the lower part of the photo

Unusual and I like them.

I like them both, though i am not keen on the peeling paint on the first, but really good all the same

I played around with the second image in photoshop and will post it here if it's ok with you. Just turn on "image editing Ok" in your profile

Interesting background on the first one, not really liking the second one.

Image editing turned on now.
Play around

Not to be crude... and maybe I've yet to mature... but in the second picture, I can't resist but look down her blouse. It's a bit distracting, although the point of interest is supposed to be her expression.

I like the edit on the second one. I think in the original #2 the eyes were re-touched a bit too much for my taste, they look like she was wearing contacts

#2 looks like it really hurts..but I like it..cool