Approve the Cookies
This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and our Privacy Policy.
OK
Forums  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear
Guest
Forums  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear
Register to forums    Log in

 
FORUMS Photo Sharing & Discussion Critique Corner 
Thread started 10 Nov 2008 (Monday) 15:02
Search threadPrev/next
sponsored links (only for non-logged)

Guitarist

 
RichSoansPhotos
Cream of the Crop
5,981 posts
Likes: 44
Joined Aug 2007
Location: London, UK
     
Nov 10, 2008 15:02 |  #1
bannedPermanent ban

Can anyone lend a critical eye as to what is wrong, if anything is wrong with this photo, apart from the second one, which is at a weird angle (done it on purpose) and also, excuse the file size, I just couldn't get the original one to fit on the image sharing sites

IMAGE NOT FOUND
HTTP response: NOT FOUND | MIME changed to 'image/png'



IMAGE NOT FOUND
HTTP response: NOT FOUND | MIME changed to 'image/png'



  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
0ozma
Member
246 posts
Joined Oct 2008
     
Nov 10, 2008 16:18 |  #2

Cool pics, but for some reason it feels like I'm looking through water when seeing them.... Don't know the correct terminology :)


Canon 50D | Canon EF 50mm F/1.4 | Canon 70-200mm F/4 L | Canon 17-55mm F/2.8 |
Save $5 on a new Zenfolio account using this code:
3P6-72F-UB8

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
RichSoansPhotos
THREAD ­ STARTER
Cream of the Crop
5,981 posts
Likes: 44
Joined Aug 2007
Location: London, UK
     
Nov 10, 2008 16:30 |  #3
bannedPermanent ban

Yeah, ok, I get it, but it was the way it was resized, strange innit?




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
DAMphyne
"the more I post, the less accurate..."
Avatar
2,157 posts
Gallery: 1 photo
Likes: 34
Joined Feb 2003
Location: Northern Indiana, USA
     
Nov 10, 2008 16:51 |  #4

Looks like you turned off the "constrain proportions" box when resizing.
Otherwise, fun pictures.


David
Digital set me free
"Welcome Seeker! Now, don't feel alone here in the New Age, because there's a seeker born every minute.";)
www.damphyne.com (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
Walczak ­ Photo
Goldmember
1,034 posts
Joined Apr 2008
     
Nov 10, 2008 16:55 |  #5

Well as already mentioned, the aspect ratio of the crop was wrong...makes the shots look distorted. Secondly the color of the second image is way off compared with the first shot. I can't tell if it's maybe from stage lights or if it's just way over-saturated, but the colors in the guitar are so hot there's almost no detail. In fact, it doesn't even look like the same guitar...and I'm saying this as not only a photographer but as a musician/guitar player myself who also does guitar refinishing. In the first shot the guitar looks like it has a "Honey Burst" finish and in the second shot it looks like a "Heritage Cherry Burst". Now I would almost be willing to accept that maybe the guitar player just switched guitars at some point (I do that a lot myself) but if you look at the head stock of the guitar in the second shot...it's blue. Should be black as in the first shot. To me this indicates a color problem with the image and not a different instrument :D. Beyond that, the expression on the guitar player's face in that second shot just really doesn't capture any emotion or anything...looks like he's just standing there playing.

The first shot, with the correct aspect ratio might make a half-way decent print but at the risk of sounding rude, even if the issues with the second shot were from processing, I don't think I'd really bother with it.

Just my $.02 worth,
Jim


"It is horrifying that we have to fight our own government to save the environment. " - Ansel Adams
Walczak Photography - www.walczakphoto.izfre​e.com (external link)
Gear List

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
RichSoansPhotos
THREAD ­ STARTER
Cream of the Crop
5,981 posts
Likes: 44
Joined Aug 2007
Location: London, UK
     
Nov 10, 2008 17:48 |  #6
bannedPermanent ban

What is your guess is the right aspect ratio?




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
Walczak ­ Photo
Goldmember
1,034 posts
Joined Apr 2008
     
Nov 11, 2008 10:04 |  #7

400dabuser wrote in post #6661402 (external link)
What is your guess is the right aspect ratio?


Well, first off, it were me I'd just go back and reprocess from the original and as DAMphyne said, make sure you have "constrain proportions" checked when you resize. If for some reason that's not possible (as in you don't have the original), what I would do is make the "canvas" larger in Photoshop and then use the "Free Transform" tool to correct the image...just stretch it horizontally until it looks correct.

Peace,
Jim


"It is horrifying that we have to fight our own government to save the environment. " - Ansel Adams
Walczak Photography - www.walczakphoto.izfre​e.com (external link)
Gear List

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
twistedlim
Member
84 posts
Joined Jul 2007
     
Nov 11, 2008 14:15 |  #8

nice captures but as others have said the proportions (ratios) are not correct.




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
RichSoansPhotos
THREAD ­ STARTER
Cream of the Crop
5,981 posts
Likes: 44
Joined Aug 2007
Location: London, UK
     
Nov 11, 2008 18:14 |  #9
bannedPermanent ban

Yeah, I know, it just that really I wanted the critic on the photos, really




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
twistedlim
Member
84 posts
Joined Jul 2007
     
Nov 12, 2008 07:05 as a reply to  @ RichSoansPhotos's post |  #10

Ah, then good captures. I like the angles but sometimes they can be overdone. I like the view but also like to mix them up with some traditional looking shots. Here is one of Willie Porter I took last weekend. Dim area it was. ISO 3200 at f2.0

IMAGE: http://www.pbase.com/twistedlim/image/105695427.jpg



  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
RichSoansPhotos
THREAD ­ STARTER
Cream of the Crop
5,981 posts
Likes: 44
Joined Aug 2007
Location: London, UK
     
Nov 12, 2008 13:42 |  #11
bannedPermanent ban

I feel so embarrassed, I put the width pixels higher than the height, and since it was taken at that weird angle, hence the weird aspect ratio (the second one)




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
RichSoansPhotos
THREAD ­ STARTER
Cream of the Crop
5,981 posts
Likes: 44
Joined Aug 2007
Location: London, UK
     
Nov 15, 2008 07:06 |  #12
bannedPermanent ban

IMAGE NOT FOUND
HTTP response: NOT FOUND | MIME changed to 'image/png'


This is the photo again of the first one, with now the aspect ratio constrained



  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
RichSoansPhotos
THREAD ­ STARTER
Cream of the Crop
5,981 posts
Likes: 44
Joined Aug 2007
Location: London, UK
     
Nov 15, 2008 10:38 |  #13
bannedPermanent ban

Walczak Photo wrote in post #6661092 (external link)
Well as already mentioned, the aspect ratio of the crop was wrong...makes the shots look distorted. Secondly the color of the second image is way off compared with the first shot. I can't tell if it's maybe from stage lights or if it's just way over-saturated, but the colors in the guitar are so hot there's almost no detail. In fact, it doesn't even look like the same guitar...and I'm saying this as not only a photographer but as a musician/guitar player myself who also does guitar refinishing. In the first shot the guitar looks like it has a "Honey Burst" finish and in the second shot it looks like a "Heritage Cherry Burst". Now I would almost be willing to accept that maybe the guitar player just switched guitars at some point (I do that a lot myself) but if you look at the head stock of the guitar in the second shot...it's blue. Should be black as in the first shot. To me this indicates a color problem with the image and not a different instrument :D. Beyond that, the expression on the guitar player's face in that second shot just really doesn't capture any emotion or anything...looks like he's just standing there playing.

The first shot, with the correct aspect ratio might make a half-way decent print but at the risk of sounding rude, even if the issues with the second shot were from processing, I don't think I'd really bother with it.

Just my $.02 worth,
Jim


Just think that the sun was shining at that moment, but thanks for your critique




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
sponsored links (only for non-logged)

1,319 views & 0 likes for this thread, 5 members have posted to it.
Guitarist
FORUMS Photo Sharing & Discussion Critique Corner 
AAA
x 1600
y 1600

Jump to forum...   •  Rules   •  Forums   •  New posts   •  RTAT   •  'Best of'   •  Gallery   •  Gear   •  Reviews   •  Member list   •  Polls   •  Image rules   •  Search   •  Password reset   •  Home

Not a member yet?
Register to forums
Registered members may log in to forums and access all the features: full search, image upload, follow forums, own gear list and ratings, likes, more forums, private messaging, thread follow, notifications, own gallery, all settings, view hosted photos, own reviews, see more and do more... and all is free. Don't be a stranger - register now and start posting!


COOKIES DISCLAIMER: This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and to our privacy policy.
Privacy policy and cookie usage info.


POWERED BY AMASS forum software 2.58forum software
version 2.58 /
code and design
by Pekka Saarinen ©
for photography-on-the.net

Latest registered member was a spammer, and banned as such!
2783 guests, 142 members online
Simultaneous users record so far is 15,144, that happened on Nov 22, 2018

Photography-on-the.net Digital Photography Forums is the website for photographers and all who love great photos, camera and post processing techniques, gear talk, discussion and sharing. Professionals, hobbyists, newbies and those who don't even own a camera -- all are welcome regardless of skill, favourite brand, gear, gender or age. Registering and usage is free.