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Nov 10, 2008 20:21 |  #1

Please give me some ctitic and comment. Thank you.


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Nov 10, 2008 20:23 |  #2

Like Both pictures the stray hairs in the first picture are distracting and the eyes look just a little over done for my taste in the second.

beautiful model. Nice lighting and nice colors/Image IQ


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Nov 10, 2008 20:30 |  #3

Nice portrait, very lovely model and the lighting is good too. Obviously not your first portrait, just your first P. post. Lips look a bit over sharpened in the lips on the first, and I would try to remove the red from her eyes. Nice work.


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Nov 10, 2008 20:40 |  #4

Thanks for the comment. I am a slob in photoshopping. I did not do much except skin smoothing and some minor touch up. The lighting was done with softbox overhead and silver reflector position under her chest (clam shell lighting).




  
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