4Bucks Senior Member  660 posts Likes: 4 Joined Nov 2008 Location: The Dry Side of WA More info | Nov 17, 2008 21:21 | #1 This is my daughter. I said her name... she turned and smiled (hope you like the smile. I have a lot of money invested in those teeth).  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. 4Bucks does not = photo for $... Four Buckleys in the family
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Svetlana Goldmember  3,357 posts Likes: 11 Joined May 2008 Location: Calgary, AB More info | Nov 17, 2008 21:59 | #2 She is beautiful!! I love the smile! I'd sharpen the eyes a little and maybe add some contrast to make them pop. Canon 7D, 5Dmk2, 70-200mm f/2.8L II IS, Canon 50 1.2L, 35 1.4L, 85 1.8, Canon 16-35L, Canon 100 2.8L IS Macro, Speedlight 580EX II x 2, 430 EX, enthusiasm.
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Nov 18, 2008 08:37 | #3 Great semi-candid shot, very natural/unforced feel to it. I agree with Svetlana about the eyes, a little fill flash would have gone a long ways to help the eyes pop here. But for a candid sometimes the lack of planning every detail is the only way you get the shot in the moment. I would try a version of this where you crop off some of the right side, there's a little too much space there IMO... maybe try a square crop, keeping some of the background flowers, and see how that works. it also feels just a tad too warm... maybe lose a little red. 5DmkII, 5DmkIII, 5DS R, 15mm, 16-35 f/2.8 II L, 100 Macro f/2.8 L, 70-200 f/2.8 L IS, 85 f/1.8, 580EX II, 580EX, 550EX
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j-hill Member 34 posts Joined Jul 2006 More info | Nov 18, 2008 08:39 | #4 Nice picture and I think you made a good investment!
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jdlloyd67 I'm a POTN-aholic!  1,565 posts Joined Jun 2008 Location: Orlando, FL More info | Nice shot! She looks a little like a young Julia Roberts. Beautiful daughter. You should be proud! - Dave -
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4Bucks THREAD STARTER Senior Member 660 posts Likes: 4 Joined Nov 2008 Location: The Dry Side of WA More info | Nov 18, 2008 18:15 | #6 Thanks everyone. Like I said, I am very new at this. I will try out your suggestions and repost the edit when I get home. 4Bucks does not = photo for $... Four Buckleys in the family
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mtnbikur Member 104 posts Joined Feb 2008 More info | Nov 18, 2008 18:27 | #7 Great photo! Did the smile suddenly disappear when she realized what happened?
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FocalPrincess Cream of the Crop  8,223 posts Joined Jun 2008 Location: Hibernating near Hershey More info | Nov 18, 2008 22:02 | #8 She's beautiful! Blog
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