One more shot of this fantastic 'non-model' model.
Any suggestions for improvement?
(sorry for the watermark :confused
S-Man Goldmember 2,008 posts Likes: 2 Joined Nov 2007 More info | Nov 23, 2008 18:43 | #1 One more shot of this fantastic 'non-model' model.
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Point-n-shoot-n Goldmember 2,037 posts Likes: 1127 Joined Jun 2008 Location: Tampa, Florida More info | Nov 23, 2008 19:01 | #2 Looks good to me! The hairlight really shows off her color...I like it! Canon 5D mk IV, Canon 5D mk iii, Canon 5d classic, Rebel XTI 400D 18-55 kit lens, Canon EF 85mm 1:1.8, Canon EF 17-40 F4L, Quantaray 70-300 1:4-5.6 LD, Canon 70-200 F2.8 iiL, Canon EF135 F2 L, Canon 200 F2 L, Tamron 28-75 1:2.8 , 2 alien bee 800's, 430 EXii, 580 EXii, rectangular and octo softboxes, assorted umbrellas, portable backdrops, radio triggers and still adding.............
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Rascalphoto Senior Member 380 posts Joined Feb 2007 Location: S.W. Washington state More info | Nov 23, 2008 19:01 | #3 Great shot, beautiful model. Like this shot a lot. Only two things I would work on if it were my shot. 1, Try to control the hair lighting a bit more so you don't have the spill-over on her left shoulder, and 2, blur or iron the lines out of the background. Also would crop out some the dead space. Nice work though, I would be happy if I were her. Randy
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Nov 23, 2008 19:07 | #4 Rascalphoto wrote in post #6745896 Great shot, beautiful model. Like this shot a lot. Only two things I would work on if it were my shot. 1, Try to control the hair lighting a bit more so you don't have the spill-over on her left shoulder, and 2, blur or iron the lines out of the background. Also would crop out some the dead space. Nice work though, I would be happy if I were her. Thanks, good suggestions. How do I control a hair light more?
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1shot4u Goldmember 1,568 posts Joined Apr 2008 Location: Augusta, Ga More info | Nov 23, 2008 19:30 | #5 Overall shot is good..thanks for sharing. Stephen Shell
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Rascalphoto Senior Member 380 posts Joined Feb 2007 Location: S.W. Washington state More info | Nov 25, 2008 10:37 | #6 About controlling the hair light, I'm better at the concept than the application. Perhaps if I give this thread a bump somebody with more experience with this will respond. Randy
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Nov 25, 2008 11:34 | #7 Rascalphoto wrote in post #6756599 About controlling the hair light, I'm better at the concept than the application. This is one of the reasons you need the proper flash to do this job. I'm not sure who is suggesting people go out and buy these little d/c powered on camera type of flash units and use them for off camera applications but they should be shot at sunset.
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Nov 25, 2008 11:55 | #8 Thanks for the insight, Benji.
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Zansho "I'd kill for a hot pink 40D" More info | Nov 25, 2008 12:13 | #9 One of the issues I see with this photo, is that you have her shoulders square to the camera. In my opinion, it's not very flattering pose because it makes her seem a bit more larger than she really is. I would have turned her shoulders a little bit more in, that way you can get a more flattering silhouette and and still make her look curvy but in a flattering way. Also, there seems to be too much dead space up top, so I'd crop a little bit more closer to her head. http://www.michaeljsamaripa.com
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PhotosByKatie Member 213 posts Joined Jan 2007 More info | Nov 25, 2008 12:14 | #10 I am just starting to learn how to use a hair light and where to set it. What do you usually meter your hair light at?
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Nov 25, 2008 12:33 | #11 thanks for the offer, Zansho, I'm in Houston, so it'd be a bit of a drive. Hit me up if you're ever in the area though. I have a buddy with some AB's and we worked with them this past weekend...it was alot different and more effective. Softboxes rock! One day i'll have my own.
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Zansho "I'd kill for a hot pink 40D" More info | Nov 25, 2008 12:46 | #12 My profotos are very much what I paid for - they're super robust, tough, and travel VERY well. I can dial down in tenths of a stop, and that's useful for fine control of how I want to illuminate things. Additionally, I can pull a head from the pack without damaging anything or not having to dump the power /turn off the pack first. And their accessories are top notch, I have 2 Softboxes, one Octobox, one Strip light and two beauty dishes. All in all, I've spent about 6k on my lighting system alone. http://www.michaeljsamaripa.com
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Nov 25, 2008 14:04 | #13 Photos By Katie wrote in post #6757196 I am just starting to learn how to use a hair light and where to set it. What do you usually meter your hair light at? I do alot of shooting on black, Benji, I know you said for it not to be on the shoulders or anwhere but the hair but it is a nice seperation for those wearing dark clothes. How would you recommend to do a hairlight and clothing seperation? At my last shoot, I had a strip light coming from the back corner on the subject, highlighting the shoulder and side of head as well as the side of the body. would you recommend a snoot maybe coming from the other side as more of a hair light? I really want to figure this out as I hate floating heads. S-Man, your hairlight accents her hair just perfectly. Shows the color very well. Kathleen Kat,
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jeffg333 Member 37 posts Joined Nov 2008 Location: MA More info | Nov 25, 2008 14:31 | #14 I really like the hair light outcome on this. very nice. Canon 20D•24-105L f4•50 f1.4•10-20 f4•batt-grip•580exII•430ex
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Nov 25, 2008 14:48 | #15 Nicely done Benji. Thanks for the link.
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