Veronica =) c&c if you'd like xD

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Aaron,

Hopefully you shot this in Raw and still have the file because her entire forehead, nose and left cheek are all overexposed, and her hair is underexposed.

Benji

I do, but this is what i was going for.

Any chance you could fix it so they go down and not across...?

Travisj wrote in post #6819285
Any chance you could fix it so they go down and not across...?

odd..it showing down for me! I'll take a look though =)

Merp,

I like what you did here man. Good images for a bedroom shoot. What sort of lighting did you use? Just a flash?

My only comment is on #2 the laptop is a tiny bit distracting.

these are great.... really great... love the lighting and the subject..... well done

#1 is a bit hot on her face, probably because the flash was so close. Maybe try bouncing off the ceiling if possible next time. I think the composition was great on all these and the lighting was good too. Keep practicing and you'll have some great stuff. Well done.

I like the tat

RSVPhoto wrote in post #6820771
Merp,

I like what you did here man. Good images for a bedroom shoot. What sort of lighting did you use? Just a flash?

My only comment is on #2 the laptop is a tiny bit distracting.

Yes just my 430ex, she had a florescent light up to the left of entire bed.

Thank you =)

40Driggs wrote in post #6821033
#1 is a bit hot on her face, probably because the flash was so close. Maybe try bouncing off the ceiling if possible next time. I think the composition was great on all these and the lighting was good too. Keep practicing and you'll have some great stuff. Well done.

Thank you, Yep I was definitely right against the wall on that one lol good call.

Caysnco wrote in post #6820982
these are great.... really great... love the lighting and the subject..... well done

ty!

I might tone down the orange a tiny bit. Its a good look but maybe tone it down a just tad.