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Dec 31, 2008 23:48 |  #1

please comment! thanks! i really wish that the power lines werent there...btw it had to be that house( its for the school paper) and the sun is very bright on the top right coner.


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Jan 01, 2009 00:55 |  #2

It should be possible to clone our the power lines (best before any other PP). I'd straighten the sides of the building and crop out the bit on the right and some of the blank sky.




  
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Jan 01, 2009 02:40 |  #3

Yup. Those power lines would be super easy to get rid of. The power lines give a weird glow that looks kinda funky.

As chique stated, straighten up the house. I'd also maybe lighten the sky just a tad to give the top of the house more definition. It gets a little washed in that area.

Otherwise, it looks like you captured a great shot.


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Jan 01, 2009 21:09 |  #4

To me it seems to be rendered a little too dark and a little too contrasty. I think you could make your point without going quite so far.


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Jan 01, 2009 23:17 |  #5

thanks for the feedback :)


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