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what else would you do to these shots? looking for C&C

 
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Jan 27, 2009 08:10 |  #1

hey.
hows it goin everybody?

hoping to get some suggestions, ideas and insight.
just a couple of shots i took while travelling in new zealand, what else do you think they need? i have done a small amount of fairly basic editing but how would you improve them further? be harsh lol.

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EDIT: i have culled them down to two shots now.

thank you for your time :).



  
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Jan 27, 2009 15:19 |  #2

If you're looking for critiques, I suggest posting one shot at a time. Many people are browsing through during lunch and don't have the time to give enough attention to all of them.


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Jan 27, 2009 18:08 |  #3

Hey, it's going good thanks for asking ;)

The pics...I like most of them, they are interesting.

My fav is the first one, but it seems a tad underexposed (maybe not?)

Pic 2 - Cool, love the purple in the tree, would of been nice to see more of the water in the picture and your subjects maybe not so centered.

Pic 3 - Nice. Interesting looking duck.

Pic 4 - Lacking something here...... ?? can't put my finger on it. (LOL) (get it? the girl's finger is pointing at something... ya not too funny huh)

Pic 5 - I would crop a lil bit off the top and adjust colors... she looks very red, but nice pic.

That's just my humble opinion... :)


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Jan 27, 2009 18:21 as a reply to  @ howaboutnow's post |  #4

thanks for that howboutnow.

i agree with you on number 4, i think the grass takes up too much of the frame....thought i would see who else agrees with me lol.

and i have taken out a fair bit of red and magenta to the last shot, it was taken at a performance and there was different colored lighting flashing on and off. i took this shot with the subject covered in red/orange lighting.

thanks again for the feedback (and the comedy ;))




  
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