Looking for critique and comments please

I want to improve - help me! Honest comments and helpful critiques are appreciated!

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I don't like the flat lighting on her face in #1, and I don't like the pose in #6 - it looks distorted.

There is also a small problem in #7 that most people won't notice, but her right forearm and her right upper arm have a tonal merger that creates a puzzle for the eye in trying to figure out what that piece of jewelry is doing where it is.

However, they are individually and as a whole some of the best glamour pictures seen here on the the "Corner".

Congratulations!

I hope you are getting paid well for this quality of work

Robert_Lay wrote in post #7449756
I don't like the flat lighting on her face in #1, and I don't like the pose in #6 - it looks distorted.

There is also a small problem in #7 that most people won't notice, but her right forearm and her right upper arm have a tonal merger that creates a puzzle for the eye in trying to figure out what that piece of jewelry is doing where it is.

However, they are individually and as a whole some of the best glamour pictures seen here on the the "Corner".

Congratulations!

Robert -

Thanks. I agree on the lighting in #1 - I had a huge 4x6 softbox camera left and a small kicker strip camera right. The lighting did come out too even. I liked #6 because I got her to laugh and snapped the shot as she was looking up. I appreciate the feedback very much!

And Watermelon - I didn't get paid for this shoot. Still building my portfolio. If you know any models in the Memphis, TN area who want to pose, pass them my way. It's free for a while.

wow very nice shots i would say, only one thing puzzles me is her right foot when she is reclined.....looks a bit uncmfy/unnatural to me....other then that, great shots!

macobee wrote in post #7452186
wow very nice shots i would say, only one thing puzzles me is her right foot when she is reclined.....looks a bit uncmfy/unnatural to me....other then that, great shots!

I always ask them to point their toes as it elongates the leg. Jenni is a great model - didn't even have to tell her. The rule usually is "if it's uncomfortable, it's a good pose. If it's REALLY uncomfortable, it's even better."

1. not sure on the lighting in this one, maybe edit the tat out.
3. if she is to appear nude, I would blur out the bun-huggers on her right leg.
6. I like this the best, she has beautiful eyes and a beautiful smile.

Nice set of pictures.

Huskers69 wrote in post #7456320
1. not sure on the lighting in this one, maybe edit the tat out.
3. if she is to appear nude, I would blur out the bun-huggers on her right leg.
6. I like this the best, she has beautiful eyes and a beautiful smile.

Nice set of pictures.

Thanks! In #3 she is actually wearing a dress that is pulled up. I can edit the edges out that showed up in the photo pretty easily - I didn't notice it in camera. #1 was one of the first (if not THE first) photo of the shoot. I wasn't crazy about the outfit but I did like the pose.

Appreciate all the feedback!