Now that I've had a chance to see the full file, here are my thoughts...
Shooting in portrait mode has created some limitations....
- You were unable to shoot in raw and your JPEG from the camera now has certain settings "cooked" into it that you would probably wish you could change.
- WB is off and correction is not straightforward.
- Sharpness was only set to 2 in camera, which means the photo is a little softer than one might usually expect straight out of camera.
- Portrait mode creates a pinkish colour bias that I personally don't like.
- You had no control over the choice of focus point and the camera chose what it decided to focus on. Fortunately, in this example all points were lit up, so the camera had very solid focus established throughout the lineup.
Had you shot in one of the creative zones you would have had the luxury of picking your preferred focus point and also in shooting to raw. By shooting raw you could have then had the option to freely change the chosen picture style, white balance and amount of sharpening, after shooting, with no detriment to the final image quality. Any necessary adjustments to exposure/levels/curves would have been possible on the full 14 bit data rather than the compressed 8 bit data that JPEGs are limited to.
So that's hopefully a bit of useful food for thought for the future.
Now, back to the photo. With the benefit of the full sized original image to look at I'd say it actually is focused reasonably well and, as I stated earlier, your DOF is ample to cover the subject matter. Looking at the lighting levels, and colouring, between your subject and the background I'd say that the flash was contributing fairly little to the scene and most of the lighting is from ambient light. This means that any subject movement might well show up in the image. The guy second in from the left of the frame is definitely moving his head. He is visibly more blurry than the rest of the pack. It is possible that there is a tiny amount of natural movement in the others which, combined with the low sharpening, has created the slight softness you see.
With the crop and resize and output at quite high compression to fit the limits for upload to this forum as an attachment that has further diminished the apparent quality. The final icing on the cake - when you downsize an image it always requires a little sharpening afterwards in order to look its best. Again, if this had been shot raw you could have readily cropped and resized with no quality loss. As it is you're taking a double hit on JPEG compression on a file that was not quite perfect in the first place.
All that said, here is my effort to smarten it up a bit based on the original image....
Full image with a small crop and resize....
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100% crop of the centre region....
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So all in all it's really not at all bad. It just needs a little finessing.