Paige and Jaimie at the park

These are my nieces, Paige and Jaimie. The first two were taken at the park near our house on the jungle gym there. Paige was absolutely terrified and wouldn't let go (photo number one) but Jaimie had more fun trying to find our house from up there.
The last one is just a shot I took at Paige's birthday a couple of weeks ago. Snap shot of her playing hide and seek with the other kids.

C & C is welcomed - I already know I cut Paige's feet off in the first photo (soooo cranky with myself for that!) but if there's anything else, I'd love to know how I can improve Thanks!

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#3

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jpsamora wrote in post #7505570
Wow! Those are great. Any pp on the 3rd one?

Thanks! Yep, using Photoscape I bumped the contrast a little, added a vignette and some bloom.

Svetlana wrote in post #7505546
Great images! Love 2 and 3.
May be try "the rule of thirds" when placing the subject in the frame (guilty of that sometimes myself and learning, too)...

Very very good point, Didn't even notice! Thank you - might try some cropping a bit later I think!

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CBownPhoto wrote in post #7505784
I really like the second one! I think the lighting on the first one is a bit harsh and distracting though.

Thanks - I agree completely. I wish it had a seat on the other side of the jungle gym to face the sun rather than have it behind! Oh well

Another one (My other half and Jaimie) - Too much contrast?

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antiskeptic87 wrote in post #7505746
Thanks! Yep, using Photoscape I bumped the contrast a little, added a vignette and some bloom.



Very very good point, Didn't even notice! Thank you - might try some cropping a bit later I think!

nice series...what is bloom?

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