Would love feedback on these model shots!

Had another shoot a couple of days ago - good honest critique and feedback appreciated. Thanks in advance!

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I think you did a fine job with the lighting, it looks lovely. My favorite of the bunch is picture 2, however have to complain about the wrinkles in her top. And not sure about the backdrop either for this one, it doesn't seem to "fit". But then again, that's just my opinion.

The last picture is nice, but had she been looking straight at the camera, nicer.

She looks pretty young and I'm not sure if the outfits really suit her, but well done!

howaboutnow wrote in post #7539267
I think you did a fine job with the lighting, it looks lovely. My favorite of the bunch is picture 2, however have to complain about the wrinkles in her top. And not sure about the backdrop either for this one, it doesn't seem to "fit". But then again, that's just my opinion.

The last picture is nice, but had she been looking straight at the camera, nicer.

She looks pretty young and I'm not sure if the outfits really suit her, but well done!

Suzanne -

Thanks for the comments. She is actually 22. I have a shot of her in the fur looking at the camera - I'll post it later.