Fun with Cards...C&C welcome

Pocket Ace's

Like the last one. Good Color on the felt but the cards look to cream, need to be white, adjust white balance.

I like the first one... comes together well, nice sharpness and appropriate DOF. #2: too much of the joker card is out of focus... it's the subject but it's not satisfying to look at. Cropping in to the card so square on looks a bit awkward somehow too. Many elements carry the eye out of frame, and the centre of the picture almost repels attention. #3: shallow depth of field and cropping are issues for me. For example, one of the very few parts of the image that is in focus is the king's head at far right... sliced through the middle. Cheers, Tony

ok, so how is this?

Much better compared to the first take on it.