Recently visited the coast and there was some sort of 'Ship Graveyard' with a lot of other random rubbish strewn around, thought this looked quite odd.
Let me know what you think 
Apr 08, 2009 03:48 | #1 Recently visited the coast and there was some sort of 'Ship Graveyard' with a lot of other random rubbish strewn around, thought this looked quite odd. Instagram
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tonydee Goldmember 2,009 posts Joined Sep 2007 Location: Tokyo More info | Apr 08, 2009 08:44 | #2 It is decidely odd, and has interest, but I think there are a few too many foreground elements leading the eye out of frame. Having only one thing with any height to it makes for a bit of a weak foreground too.... no sense of being in close to anything. Not a fan of the vignette, though not overly bothered by it either. Cheers, Tony 5D and too much glass. Mamiya 645E.
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Apr 08, 2009 15:05 | #4 bjyoder wrote in post #7690992 I like the processing, it fits well with this image. I do agree a bit with the above post though. Get a bit closer so the stairs are more prominent. Also, try to move the horizon so it does not intersect the subject. ![]() might be interesting to move the horizon so it appears to be the "landing" at the top of the stairs ... -
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DerekSimon Senior Member 736 posts Joined Feb 2009 Location: Cleveland, OH More info | Apr 08, 2009 15:58 | #5 Really nice touch with the processing but there is simply too much in this shot. I would take it closer just to focus on the stairs.
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