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Hatchling

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Apr 10, 2009 10:12 | #1

I'm new to photography and would like some honest constructive criticism. I used a Canon D60 with 50mm lens. As far as photoshop work, I just did some skin tone correction and darkened some of the background. I appreciate any comments

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hawkeye60

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Apr 10, 2009 10:17 | #2

I like it.

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Miranda Welch

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Apr 10, 2009 10:17 | #3

I think your focus looks great. I like your proccessing, too. I love the pop of her skirt. For composition, I think I'd crop a bit of the top of to bring her higher in the frame. I'd also like to see a bit more interaction with her. As it is I don't feel a connection which is my biggest CC for this photo.

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Apr 10, 2009 10:25 | #4

l like your processing too.. nice capture

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*jamie*

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Apr 10, 2009 11:54 | #5

Nice shot and I love the processing as well.
I agree w/PP about cropping a bit off the top. Also, I noticed her left foot is missing from the shot...just looks a little weird to me.

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Apr 10, 2009 12:39 | #6

Thank you for all the comments and suggestions.
Jamie
Yeah I agree about her left foot. It had sunken in the mud a little. Little bit of pain for the shot . Thanks again

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