reefergal Goldmember 1,056 posts Joined Feb 2007 Location: Oregon More info | Apr 13, 2009 00:04 | #1 Taken in front of the window with fill flash and some light room editing.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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Apr 14, 2009 00:35 | #2 WOW! this is a record for me. 102 looks and not one word of advise.
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gljphoto Mostly Lurking  19 posts Joined Apr 2009 Location: Alabama More info | Apr 14, 2009 01:34 | #3 I'm a newbie here but thought I'd offer my constructive criticism... the 2nd one is slightly overexposed as you have some "hotspots", particularly on her chest, but ever so slightly on the left side (as you look at her) of her face as well. And the first one, her chin is just slightly overexposed, bordering on a hotspot and you seem to have her nose more in focus than her eyes. Cute girl.
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AutoXer Member 167 posts Joined Sep 2005 Location: Maryland More info | Apr 14, 2009 18:14 | #4 Poses are nice, lighting isn't bad, just some tweaking (maybe the main light a tad higher ... I know, hard to do with a window - maybe a lower chair?). Touch out some of the fly-away hairs. Eyes in the second one are not sharp - I believe the eyes should always be the sharpest feature. Nice to see some nice natural, not overblown color. You are well on your way! "High Key" is NOT overexposed, and "Low Key" is NOT underexposed.
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Skrim17 The only TPBMer without a title. Enjoying my anonymity.  40,070 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jul 2006 Location: In my tree More info | Apr 14, 2009 18:17 | #5 exif is showing 1/60th of a second for shutter speed, that is very slow, hence the oof shots. You should try to keep your shutter speed above 100 unless you are on a tripod and your model is stick still. hot spots and exposure were already mentioned. good poses. Crissa
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Apr 15, 2009 10:24 | #6 looks like you used on camera fill flash and filled the brighter side of the subject - look to get your fill off camera - and work your iso- apeture - shutter to get a faster shutter as described above - first shot is better exposed - but work on the shutter speed to reduce camera shake Canon 1DXIII (2) Eos R 5R on the way 15-600 /1.2 - 5.6
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Phil.hearing Senior Member  741 posts Joined Mar 2008 More info | Apr 15, 2009 17:54 | #7 gljphoto wrote in post #7725736  I'm a newbie here but thought I'd offer my constructive criticism... the 2nd one is slightly overexposed as you have some "hotspots", particularly on her chest, but ever so slightly on the left side (as you look at her) of her face as well. And the first one, her chin is just slightly overexposed, bordering on a hotspot and you seem to have her nose more in focus than her eyes. Cute girl.  Great shots that just need some slight tweaks. yeh i agree with this ^ Canon 5D MK1 | Holga 120s | EF 24-105mm f/4.0 L IS USM | EF 16 - 35mm f/2.8 L | EF 70 - 200MM F/2.8 USM IS L | Speedlite 580EX II |
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Apr 15, 2009 23:08 | #8 Thanks for all the advise!
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Rai33 Goldmember  1,838 posts Likes: 18 Joined Jan 2009 Location: Sydney More info | Nice subject and attempt. Portfolio - Fashion/Beauty
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SuzyView Cream of the Crop  More info | Apr 16, 2009 07:34 | #10 I think the light is the issue here for the most part. But I think there is a limitation with the lens, too. It seems OFF with little depth. Try again. She's a cute model. Suzie - Still Speaking Canonese!
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*jamie* Member  71 posts Joined Jan 2008 More info | Apr 16, 2009 12:01 | #11 ITA w/the comments/suggestions posted already but wanted to add that the poses are nice & the little girl has a great smile so keep practicing! ~Just A Chick With A Camera~
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brosa911 Member 60 posts Joined Mar 2007 Location: Kansas More info | If possible, next time try to create some distance between your subject and the background.
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