My Missus and 2 Daughters (Practice with strobes)

Hi, Still playing with my 2 flash guns these were taken 1 fired into shoot thru umbrella in front of subject the other fired into a black background with gels over the flash. I'm still a beginner here but looking for c&c about these please as looking to improve all the time. I don't know if PP is over done or not. Thanks for looking

This is Leeann my better half. Straight out of Camera and redone PP. C&C More than Welcomed thanks.

Will re upload ones of my daughters when finished.

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removed will re-upload

This is Nikita my daughter re-uploaded due to my mistake in sharpening. Please C&C as really trying to improve me all round photography and PP. This one was under exposed out of camera due to my batteries running out towards the end of the shoot.

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have removed pics uploading redone ones made a mistake with not adding a mask on my sharpening layer. Thanks for comments made me look again and try to correct.


This is Siobhan my other daughter. again straight out of camera and retouched.

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you have beautiful lady's in your life.... I think they are very nice shots (but they seem a little close / sharp for the skin...my preference though) keep shooting!

Thanks for thr comments. I agree with you I think thay are a little bit to sharp but still learning.

can we see without sharpening?

Any new C&C please.. Really wanting to improve

Cheers

I think you are def on the right track.

thanks. I'll keep trying.