Little Malayla - 2 Edits - Views Please.

Took this at a friends daughters birthday party last weekend & had
a little play in Lightroom & Cs3.

My friend really likes them.

My question is, does the conversion work & could i improve them further?

Any comments welcome.

I would clone out the stray hairs over her eye and you got an awesome shot on your hands!

i like the original image.
now im working on a mac with a LCD colour profile and the conversion looks a tad yellow. was it meant to be a sepia ?

b00ty wrote in post #7737674
I would clone out the stray hairs over her eye and you got an awesome shot on your hands!

Doh - forgot the hairs. Thanks bud.

Phil.hearing wrote in post #7738359
i like the original image.
now im working on a mac with a LCD colour profile and the conversion looks a tad yellow. was it meant to be a sepia ?

The conversion is Antique Grey in Lightroom & looks fine on my screen.

I will print the print & see how it looks.

Heres a quick edit with the hair removed from the eye.

Prefer the colour, the other doesn't do much for me.