First Photo shoot

This is the first time I did a shoot. C&c is very much appreciated.

Thanks

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if this is your truly first shoot, then you're lying!
Shots look great! other than the model looking too stiff in #2, they're spot on!

Yes first time... Went to one workshop and did a Photoshop class. Just picked up my 4 bees about 2 weeks ago. I shot out of my garage.

Thanks for the nice comment

The model is gorgeous!

#1: Her skin looks too overly processed and fake. But what you did with her eyes are amazing.

#3: My fav! I love the colors, the background, the model, and everything about this photo.

P.S. what are your "4 bees"?

Great first shoot. Can't wait to see the next shoots.

#1- if you were going with a high key look, then great job! I find the eyes and the skin to be too processed.. too fake looking..
#2- skin on legs look dead... lower right corner is grey... skin tones other than that are great. skin looks too processed and plastic.
#3- best of the series.. my only problem with this is that you can see the ripples in the background but that is just me..

1 and 3 are great..slightly over processed but still very good..

WOW for a first try BRILLIANT!

I concur on the over-smoothing in #1 and oversaturation in #3
#2 is your best.
If that was your first shoot, well done! I'm sure it won't be your last!

don't know if Vincent Laforet did any better than this on his first try..

good work. i have seen your work in the Critique Corner, but not people..

phamster

canonnoob wrote in post #7739935
#1- if you were going with a high key look, then great job! I find the eyes and the skin to be too processed.. too fake looking..
#2- skin on legs look dead... lower right corner is grey... skin tones other than that are great. skin looks too processed and plastic.
#3- best of the series.. my only problem with this is that you can see the ripples in the background but that is just me..

I am still learning the skin processing. It is a tough job to get it just right. I will keep practicing and posting to learn

I see what you mean about the grey corner in #2 I will have to make sure that I bump up the lighting alittle more on the background.

The background. I will have to pull the material tighter.

Thanks so much for the kind words. Nothing to harsh at least I didnt totally screw it up.

The 4 bees are alien bees - 3 b800 and 1 b400

amazing shots for a first try.

3rd shot is just too good for words!

These a great shots, for your first time. I would have to say #2 is the best out of the three.

Love number 3. These really are some excellent shots and if it's your 1st time your a natural. Well done.

Although the skin is slightly fake looking, you didn't completely ruin the photo like a lot of folks do. its just slightly overdone. The eyes are great though.

David