Niece. C&C requested.

1D mk II and 70-200 f2.8 L

Someone has to have something to help me improve for next time...

-Mark.

Well I just joined here..so you can be my first reply

My issues... 1) the unfortunate issue with the hair being blown(too much).
2) I enjoy the color version better, the BW is very blah..maybe if you did some contrasting?
3) Her clothes are to big..It is what I look at first every time(after the hair).

I like the framing of them both..and I like the background..I would like to see that B&W in color.

brennasg wrote in post #7749691
Well I just joined here..so you can be my first reply

My issues... 1) the unfortunate issue with the hair being blown(too much).
2) I enjoy the color version better, the BW is very blah..maybe if you did some contrasting?
3) Her clothes are to big..It is what I look at first every time(after the hair).

I like the framing of them both..and I like the background..I would like to see that B&W in color.

Thanks!

When I get home, I'll post it up in Color and see what happens.

-Mark.

I like the color in the first one, but the finger chop ruins it for me. Maybe if you recropped that one?? I'd also like to see the b&w one in color cause those colors in the first were great!