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Apr 23, 2009 14:05 |  #1

Hello to you all. I bought my first camera ever about a week ago, and I am loving photography . . . :)

Now I want to know am I making decent shots, are they any good . . . Dont be shy to tell me that I suck . . . :)

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Apr 23, 2009 17:15 |  #2

The first one looks grainy and out of focus

The second one has potential (in my opinion). I would crop out the top half of the picture (a little bit above the street light), two reasons for this, 1) The shy is blow and too much dead space 2) it takes focus away from what the picture is about (the lady walking away in the middle). I would also crop a little off the bottom as well. Overall, nice concept, just need to work on execution, which is the hard part lol


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Apr 23, 2009 21:49 |  #3

Please limit your image size to 1024 pixels so that I do not have to scroll up and down to see the picture piecemeal.

You are entitled to play with selective color as much as you like. However, most of the critics on this forum are cool towards selective color (because it is so often used indiscriminantly).

Having said that, I think your B&W street scene is quite good in all other resepects.

The telephone scene is technically very good. However, I do not feel moved by it.


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