I took some shots for a local pianist/guitar player, and i wanted some feedback. Please tear it up.
zelseman Goldmember 1,922 posts Likes: 34 Joined Mar 2008 Location: Tahlequah, OK More info | Apr 28, 2009 00:53 | #1 |
DerekSimon Senior Member 736 posts Joined Feb 2009 Location: Cleveland, OH More info | Apr 28, 2009 13:44 | #2 Really nice shot. I just wish the cast that is cast from her hat wasn't so harsh.
LOG IN TO REPLY |
Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | Her face is in and out of focus to me? Her eye seems focused, but her bottom portion doesn;t seem so clear ? Alot of shadows may be the reason as well.It would be nice to see her entire face( other eye) in proper light. you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
LOG IN TO REPLY |
tonydee Goldmember 2,009 posts Joined Sep 2007 Location: Tokyo More info | Apr 28, 2009 13:53 | #4 I agree about the shadow and DOF issues. I also think the guitar - being so much brighter than its surroundings - is too dominant to thrust in a corner without unbalancing the shot. While it's common for a steel-string acoustic to be played over the right knee, uncrossing legs (if necessary) and putting it over the left brings it further into the picture and might have helped. Alternatively, another angle... perhaps from lower down and to her right. Cheers, Tony 5D and too much glass. Mamiya 645E.
LOG IN TO REPLY |
Apr 28, 2009 14:17 | #5 |
tonydee Goldmember 2,009 posts Joined Sep 2007 Location: Tokyo More info | Apr 28, 2009 15:48 | #6 zelseman wrote in post #7820196 I was having some issues with the focusing and the general IQ of the Xti in this shoot. It could have been the "focus mode" i was using on the 70-200f4L. Can someone explain the two different modes? If it's a bit like my 70-200f/2.8IS, minus the IS, there'd be a switch with AF and MF... they stand for Auto-Focus and Manual-Focus... and switch that adjusts the minimum focal distance. I suppose the latter must give some benefit in focusing speed and/or IQ when the close-range focusing is disabled, I'm sure I've read exactly what the benefit was, but wasn't interested enough to remember the details. 5D and too much glass. Mamiya 645E.
LOG IN TO REPLY |
Apr 28, 2009 21:52 | #7 |
tonydee Goldmember 2,009 posts Joined Sep 2007 Location: Tokyo More info | Apr 29, 2009 11:10 | #8 No... both settings focus to infinity (the sideways "8" symbol), as printed on the switch itself. Cheers, Tony 5D and too much glass. Mamiya 645E.
LOG IN TO REPLY |
checkgio Senior Member 379 posts Joined Apr 2009 More info | Apr 29, 2009 12:47 | #9 The face seems weird to me as if you brightened the face too much in PP.
LOG IN TO REPLY |
Apr 29, 2009 13:14 | #10 |
Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | With the heavy shadow on her face from the hat, when its lightened, it looks like she has a black eye you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
LOG IN TO REPLY |
Apr 29, 2009 13:36 | #12 |
canonnoob Cream of the Crop 8,487 posts Likes: 1 Joined Aug 2008 Location: Atlanta, GA More info | Apr 29, 2009 13:57 | #14 did you do skin smoothening on the first one? if so I can tell... thats the softness in the face... David W.
LOG IN TO REPLY |
Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | The piano shot is lovely..... you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
LOG IN TO REPLY |
![]() | x 1600 |
| y 1600 |
| Log in Not a member yet?
Register to forums
Registered members may log in to forums and access all the features: full search, image upload, follow forums, own gear list and ratings, likes, more forums, private messaging, thread follow, notifications, own gallery, all settings, view hosted photos, own reviews, see more and do more... and all is free. Don't be a stranger - register now and start posting!
|
| ||
| Latest registered member is Monkeytoes 1370 guests, 191 members online Simultaneous users record so far is 15,144, that happened on Nov 22, 2018 | |||