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Apr 29, 2009 00:29 |  #1

Took this shot of my friend out in the woods. This is one of my first portrait shots as I'm fairly new to photography besides a basic class. Thanks in advance.

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Apr 29, 2009 04:28 |  #2

I really like the attempt of this photo. Although, such a pretty girl needs some more lighting for her face and I would have liked to see her eyes (very nice blue). On that note, the subject is out of focus. Focus, light, and composition are needed and this is missing 2 of them.


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Apr 29, 2009 09:24 |  #3

jetboy wrote in post #7824214 (external link)
I really like the attempt of this photo. Although, such a pretty girl needs some more lighting for her face and I would have liked to see her eyes (very nice blue). On that note, the subject is out of focus. Focus, light, and composition are needed and this is missing 2 of them.

Agree.


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Apr 29, 2009 14:54 |  #4

Needs to be more in focus for my taste. Try to hunt for a better lit area next round also.


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Apr 29, 2009 17:18 |  #5

Thanks for the feedback guys. Noted.


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Apr 29, 2009 20:13 |  #6

Remember to focus on the eyes, 99.999% of the time


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Apr 30, 2009 10:29 |  #7

Too much shadow around her eyes. Need more light


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