great shot. really love the setting and the composition. Only thing you could change perhaps is the color of the lighting... I think a bit more yellow with a little more contrast would make this picture from AA to AAA 
mazewing Mostly Lurking  17 posts Joined May 2009 Location: the Netherlands More info | May 05, 2009 07:47 | #16 great shot. really love the setting and the composition. Only thing you could change perhaps is the color of the lighting... I think a bit more yellow with a little more contrast would make this picture from AA to AAA Gear: 50D | Tokina 12-24 | Canon EF 100 Macro F2.8 | Canon EF-S 55-250 IS | Canon EF 50mm F1.8 | Manfrotto 055XPROB + 488RC2 | Speedlite 430EX II | Lowepro Fastpack 250 & Mbag80
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tonydee Goldmember  2,009 posts Joined Sep 2007 Location: Tokyo More info | May 05, 2009 08:07 | #17 I like most things about this image, except the paleness of the courtyard and far side of the building, and the sky which just looks wrong to me... the colour, the contrast at the edges, not even sure really but just doesn't work. I'd be curious to see the original... might help me grasp what's wrong, but no worries if you want to keep it to yourself. Cheers, Tony 5D and too much glass. Mamiya 645E.
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RoyMathers THREAD STARTER I am Spartacus!  43,847 posts Likes: 2908 Joined Dec 2006 Location: Hertfordshire, United Kingdom More info | May 05, 2009 09:13 | #18 Tony - for your interest, this is the original.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin  44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | I love it as is Roy.from the first post minus the trash in the front. you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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RoyMathers THREAD STARTER I am Spartacus! 43,847 posts Likes: 2908 Joined Dec 2006 Location: Hertfordshire, United Kingdom More info | May 05, 2009 11:22 | #20 Thanks Gail - that's probably the version I'll go with.
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | I like the step there in the foreground, it leads me into the spaces. you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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LuckyStar08 Senior Member  313 posts Joined Jun 2008 Location: Minnesota More info | May 05, 2009 11:44 | #22 I love it. It's very layered and the love the multiple frame within a frame. Well done! I'd love this on my wall...awesome image! Stacy
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RoyMathers THREAD STARTER I am Spartacus! 43,847 posts Likes: 2908 Joined Dec 2006 Location: Hertfordshire, United Kingdom More info | May 05, 2009 11:50 | #23 Thank you Stacy, you're very kind.
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tonydee Goldmember 2,009 posts Joined Sep 2007 Location: Tokyo More info | May 05, 2009 14:10 | #24 Hi Roy,  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. I made no effort to be accurate with the area I selected for the hue change. You did a good job - removing various red areas evident in the original, but the transition from building to sky still doesn't quite look right... tricky one. In a way, I think cloning the building up to cover the opposite side would be more flattering than the sky, and easier to get looking right, but you may feel that's a disservice to the place this was taken. Cheers, Tony 5D and too much glass. Mamiya 645E.
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dkord Senior Member  715 posts Joined Mar 2005 Location: Washington, USA More info | May 05, 2009 14:16 | #25 Very nice image, blue skies usually go from light to dark as you get higher in the atmosphere not the other way around. Not sure which is the finish product but if the horizon lines are not square near the bottom of the frame (where it's most pronouce) the image will feel tilted. The devil is in the details...Especially at 100% crop!
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