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May 06, 2009 18:56 |  #1

A couple pictures of my dog :D
C&C is always appreciated. Thanks :)

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May 06, 2009 19:32 |  #2

I love the second shot! Wonderful!


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May 06, 2009 19:39 |  #3

First shot is classy. Lovely dog. Second shot would look good if you didn't have such a cluttered background. I'd suggest reshooting that in a deserted park because it's such a great subject. Which lens did you use for the second shot? A 15mm fisheye?



  
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May 06, 2009 19:41 as a reply to  @ Meaty0's post |  #4

Thanks for the comments :)
I used a 8mm Peleng @ f/8 for the second pic :)


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May 06, 2009 21:32 |  #5

I like your approach to all three shots. The first is perhaps the most successful in many ways but also the least interesting. The second shot has great potential, but the messy surroundings distract and the sky is in poor shape, with bad chromatic aberrations round the tree branches. Probably could clean this up to some extent in post. It's a bit unfortunate that the fencetop coincides with the top of the dogs' heads, but nothing fatal. Last shot needs a greater DOF to get the eyes sharp. The tongue already commands attention and needs no further emphasis through selective focusing. And I like your one-word captions. :)


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May 06, 2009 22:41 |  #6

When Sisyphus has commented, I often find I don't have much left to say :-). Only thing: would like to have seen the collar fully included in #3. Good work, especially #1. Cheers, Tony


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May 06, 2009 23:05 |  #7

I enjoy all of these:) 1 is awesome...2 is my favorite,although my issue with 2 is the debris on the ground in front of him..other than that I actually like the feeling the background gives me. Good job!


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May 07, 2009 00:05 |  #8

brennasg wrote in post #7873154 (external link)
I enjoy all of these:) 1 is awesome...2 is my favorite,although my issue with 2 is the debris on the ground in front of him..other than that I actually like the feeling the background gives me. Good job!


Thanks :)
It's her btw :P


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May 07, 2009 00:25 |  #9

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Thanks :)
It's her btw :P

Haha! sorry! I hate when people do that, they always say my dog is a 'he' ")


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