Is this anything? C&C please.

I took this shot a couple of nights ago at an abandoned power plant, not sure if i like it or not and would love to hear what other people think.

I used a red LED traffic control wand to do the light painting during exposure, i also used a torch to paint the graffiti.

Canon 50D w/ Sigma 10-20 @ 10mm.
30 Sec.
F/8
ISO: 400

i dont think the graffiti and the lights work with each other. to me the lights serve no purpose in conjuction with the graffiti.

like the creativity here.its odd,but creative

Definately this is a creative shot, but together the two just don't work out well.

chrisu002 wrote in post #7905018
i dont think the graffiti and the lights work with each other. to me the lights serve no purpose in conjuction with the graffiti.

have to agree with this. It would look much better with out the lights

thanks so much for the feedback everyone. very much appreciated.

this was one of the shots i wasnt sure about, so i posted to see what others thought of it. thanks so much for the honesty.