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RenderMan1010 Hatchling 8 posts Joined Jun 2008 More info | May 15, 2009 13:41 | #1 |
gjl711 Wait.. you can't unkill your own kill. 57,734 posts Likes: 4067 Joined Aug 2006 Location: Deep in the heart of Texas More info | May 15, 2009 13:42 | #2 I like the pose, the color, the border, but I'm not crazy about the blank right side. It's uninteresting and doesn't add to the photo. Not sure why, but call me JJ.
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1shot4u Goldmember 1,568 posts Joined Apr 2008 Location: Augusta, Ga More info | May 15, 2009 13:51 | #3 I agree, always try to crop forward where the person/object is facing...in most cases. I do like the shot though. Stephen Shell
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Sisyphus Senior Member 384 posts Joined Mar 2009 Location: Eugene, Oregon More info | May 15, 2009 13:59 | #4 DOF is just enough to separate the subject from background, yet the bg is still busy enough to be a distraction. Her pose isn't bad, but it does appear as if she's recoiling from something. I also agree the crop could be tighter. Canon 5D | EF 24-105 | Sigma 12-24
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tonydee Goldmember 2,009 posts Joined Sep 2007 Location: Tokyo More info | May 15, 2009 16:37 | #5 Can't help feeling it's a bit sinister. Having all that space behind her creates tension, especially given the outdoors "jungly" nature of it, darkness, blur. As Sisyphus points out, her pose is quite cramped and she looks a bit vulnerable, especially with the diminutive effect of putting her head quite low in frame, and cutting in at her hip (joints are generally not as good as mid-limb). The harsh frontal lighting on her face is also uncomfortable to look at. The camera seems to have focused on her near shoulder, and the depth-of-field seems inadequate to keep her face sharp. A smaller aperture or more carefully directed (e.g. use a different focus point, spot focus and recompose) or manual focus would have helped. Oh - nice haircut 5D and too much glass. Mamiya 645E.
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HappySnapper90 Cream of the Crop 5,145 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2008 Location: Cleveland, Ohio More info | May 15, 2009 22:04 | #6 Her cheeks and forehead seem too bright (making them flat without detail), the color balance seems a bit off, and yes she should be at the right side of the photo instead of the left. This is because people "read" (yes even a photo) from left to right.
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | I don't feel the processing added to this photo.the colors just seem way orange for me, but she is cute you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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