Pastrano Portrait

Need some CC..Thanks

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Rather nice expressions.

The huge white hunched shoulder is the first thing I saw, too bad she wasn't wearing long sleeves. Next time ask the subject to relax those shoulders. The image is about 1/2 stop underexposed which has blocked up the blacks which means the hair has lost nearly all detail, and the black clothing has no detail at all. Both have eyeglass glare.

Benji

The glare in her glasses bother me. The glare in his glasses is acceptable for me.

I dont find her expression flattering. His expression is good.

I don't know how I feel about the border. I dont think it hurts -- but I'm not sure if it helps either. Hmmm.

The glasses make the eyes strangely distorted.. The frames cut through the eyes and the reflection is not acceptable. The pose looks awkward, not too much works for me with this, sorry.

I have to agree with joayne.

And is the WB correct? There is something missing - I want to run it thru my Technicolor Dream World action...

Yup, that's what it needed...