Approve the Cookies
This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and our Privacy Policy.
OK
Forums  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear
Guest
Forums  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear
Register to forums    Log in

 
FORUMS Photo Sharing & Discussion Critique Corner 
Thread started 18 May 2009 (Monday) 15:34
Search threadPrev/next
sponsored links (only for non-logged)

Lydia Modeling

 
RenderMan1010
Hatchling
8 posts
Joined Jun 2008
     
May 18, 2009 15:34 |  #1

Took this on sat. at my fathers studio. I would like to get some input on things I might do differantly or things to watch for ....thanks


HOSTED PHOTO
please log in to view hosted photos in full size.




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
jenabean4
Member
Avatar
182 posts
Joined Oct 2008
     
May 18, 2009 15:45 |  #2

I am not a pro but just wanted to say I think she looks a bit green - maybe it is the background? She just doesnt pop if you know what I mean.


Canon 5D MII & 40D, 50 f1.4, 24-70L f2.8, 85 1.8, 580EX II Speedlite

http://www.jennadoming​ophotography.com (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
RenderMan1010
THREAD ­ STARTER
Hatchling
8 posts
Joined Jun 2008
     
May 18, 2009 15:52 |  #3

Your absolutely right about the green...I've been working on a monitor that I thought was calibrated. But stuff just doesnt seem to look right when I view it on other computers, most of which are not calibrated..Anyway thanks for the comment




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
DerekSimon
Senior Member
736 posts
Joined Feb 2009
Location: Cleveland, OH
     
May 18, 2009 16:25 |  #4

Definately calibrate your monitor for future shots. Other than that, this one looks like it can be a fairly good shot minus the green-ness.


www.dereksimon.com (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
Benji
Goldmember
2,220 posts
Gallery: 1 photo
Likes: 27
Joined Jan 2006
Location: North east Indiana
     
May 18, 2009 16:35 |  #5

A stronger fill light would have added some much needed light in her black hair. It has almost no detail.

Benji




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
sponsored links (only for non-logged)

574 views & 0 likes for this thread, 4 members have posted to it.
Lydia Modeling
FORUMS Photo Sharing & Discussion Critique Corner 
AAA
x 1600
y 1600

Jump to forum...   •  Rules   •  Forums   •  New posts   •  RTAT   •  'Best of'   •  Gallery   •  Gear   •  Reviews   •  Member list   •  Polls   •  Image rules   •  Search   •  Password reset   •  Home

Not a member yet?
Register to forums
Registered members may log in to forums and access all the features: full search, image upload, follow forums, own gear list and ratings, likes, more forums, private messaging, thread follow, notifications, own gallery, all settings, view hosted photos, own reviews, see more and do more... and all is free. Don't be a stranger - register now and start posting!


COOKIES DISCLAIMER: This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and to our privacy policy.
Privacy policy and cookie usage info.


POWERED BY AMASS forum software 2.58forum software
version 2.58 /
code and design
by Pekka Saarinen ©
for photography-on-the.net

Latest registered member is Thunderstream
1516 guests, 97 members online
Simultaneous users record so far is 15,144, that happened on Nov 22, 2018

Photography-on-the.net Digital Photography Forums is the website for photographers and all who love great photos, camera and post processing techniques, gear talk, discussion and sharing. Professionals, hobbyists, newbies and those who don't even own a camera -- all are welcome regardless of skill, favourite brand, gear, gender or age. Registering and usage is free.