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Another shot at a Sunset

 
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May 29, 2009 18:46 |  #1

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I get home to catch the sunset once, maybe twice a week. This is straight out of the camera. Input on how to do it better would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

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May 29, 2009 21:36 |  #2

Too centered, horizontally.
Also needs something else, such as a boat or a person walking along the beach.


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I like it; the four birds flying across are a nice touch.


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May 30, 2009 15:30 as a reply to  @ CJinAustin's post |  #4

Seems a little flat to me. A boost in contrast would really help.

Also +1 on the centered point that Robert mentioned.


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Like Robert said, it is too centred, as in to much dead centre of the picture, top right or left would of been nicer




  
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