Recent Shoot of a Couple C&C

This is my second shoot please tell me how i did this time around. Here are just a couple out of many. Not necessarily the best of the bunch just the few that i have post processed so far.

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#1 and #3... love the desaturated look you've got going there. #2 has almost too much color for me, perhaps it's his shirt being so blue that catches me that way. Good photo's in my book though

Thank you for the coments

try to edit 2 into being the same at the set

I do have a version of #2 that is like the others, I took 60 shots of them for her birthday, and i am editing each one in a few different ways just to give them some options.

I'm not a fan of the desaturated ones. And #2 would be pretty good if it were a tighter crop

Unless they are brother and sister, and assuming they love one another they should be touching one another. In the second image he could very easily place his left hand around her waist and his right hand on her upper arm. But for now, here is what I would do with the best of those above.

Benji

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I like the crop, and agree with the arm placement. Most of the others that i am in the process of processing, are more intimate.

Wow Benji..... that is way cool. Where can I learn that edit technique? Is there a particular name for it? I like. TIA.
Nice pictures.

Benji wrote in post #8098459
Unless they are brother and sister, and assuming they love one another they should be touching one another. In the second image he could very easily place his left hand around her waist and his right hand on her upper arm. But for now, here is what I would do with the best of those above.

Benji

#2 looks overly saturated to me. I'm not sure how I feel about the PP on the 1st and 3rd. That color tone makes me think of zombie, dead, etc.

I would probably like #1 best if not for the PP.

Here is another, one of the better ones I think.

Much better though I think you should fix her fly away hairs and maybe try to smooth out her bra lines

This one is much better! I would crop it though.

Asian Jul wrote in post #8099926
Much better though I think you should fix her fly away hairs and maybe try to smooth out her bra lines

Ok thanks, for the bra lines would you use the healing brush or would a selective Gaussian blur be better

yeah, i like the last one too. #2 is good... I think the color in the last pic sits right in the middle of all of them.... not to bright, not to zombie =)