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Arstine
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Jun 17, 2009 01:16 |  #1

Today I got my first "real" digital camera. It's not an SLR, but it seems to work for getting the feel of things. Just wanted to post up a couple shots that have only been edited for size. Links to the bigger images are below each picture.

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f/5, 1/280, ISO 64
http://i305.photobucke​t.com …amera%20Pics/DS​CF0197.jpg (external link)


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f/5, 1/15th, ISO 100
http://i305.photobucke​t.com …amera%20Pics/DS​CF0096.jpg (external link)

My camera says Canon and goes clickity clickity click.
My Flickr (external link)- (external link)Snapshots and fun pics go here.
http://www.photosbyjas​on.net (external link)

  
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Jun 17, 2009 03:11 |  #2

The first one looks blown out to me. And could definitely use more bokeh. Try moving your F stop closer to 2.0 for the BG blur to really kick in. Plus the flower isn't the most attractive that I've seen.

I like the second. Very cute and the lighting is nice. Also did a good job on the framing. Could be sharper, but it's good for a first shot.

Keep it up.


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