My second E-session CC welcome!!

Will be doing this wedding in about 2 months... Please let me know how these came out.

Thanks!
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more....

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Great looking couple. Well composed shots with good backgrounds. I would like to see a little more interaction between the couple other than standard poses. What you have though is very well done. Should be a great wedding.

This is a pretty good set for a second shoot.

Since there are so many photos, here are a few general comments:
1. Check/fix your horizon lines, especially the shots by the water.
2. Use your histogram to verify your exposures. Some seem too bright (the first picture and second set) while others are underexposed.
3. If you have it, use some off camera flash to help balance out the subjects with the bright backgrounds.

Keep shooting and posting.

yuriyo923 wrote in post #8130587
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really like the interaction on those 2

and you messed up #8's tag... (8 is inside the brackets)

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rweav72 wrote in post #8131738
Great looking couple. Well composed shots with good backgrounds. I would like to see a little more interaction between the couple other than standard poses. What you have though is very well done. Should be a great wedding.

Thanks!

moeronn wrote in post #8133713
This is a pretty good set for a second shoot.

Since there are so many photos, here are a few general comments:
1. Check/fix your horizon lines, especially the shots by the water.
2. Use your histogram to verify your exposures. Some seem too bright (the first picture and second set) while others are underexposed.
3. If you have it, use some off camera flash to help balance out the subjects with the bright backgrounds.

Keep shooting and posting.

Used off camera 540ez on light stand, bare.. I guess need to punch it up a notch.. I didn't want it to be the main light, just to have some catch light in the eyes...
I do seem to have some issues with keeping the horizon level... need to work on that more. Thanks for your comments!

ShadowGLI wrote in post #8133753
and you messed up #8's tag... (8 is inside the brackets)

Thanks, fixed

Anyone else please I changed my original posts, reposted edited pics.

What do you think?

Still way too many pics to comment on and numbering them would help.

Good job - well done.

Nice exposure and PP, great looking couple makes it easy, poses are all too similar though, try getting more shots of them looking at each other, or the bride looking at the groom with the groom looking at the camera (or vice versa), or the couple both looking elsewhere. I'm no expert at posing, but I try to avoid shots of couples looking straight down the lens, it's basically just well executed tourist shots and here at the forum I think we're better than that!

yeah numbering would help. I like what you did on the first set of pictures by adding vignetting to refocus the eyes on the couple, but after you did it once, i was sort of expecting it for the rest of the set. As a result, my eyes started to drift towards the boat in the background. =D

Edited numbers.. I'm still getting used to posing the couple and telling them what to do.. My next one should go even better, but this was a good and comfortable shoot.

I really like this set. Very nice couple.
Only a minor thing, I'd straighten the horizon in #5.

The series is solid. I think your clients will be very happy. NIce PP, like the effects.