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xonacs
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Jun 22, 2009 07:47 |  #1

Hi all, I'd love some Critique on below picture - anything I can do to improve on it?

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Jun 22, 2009 10:45 |  #2

As an exercise in panning, it serves a purpose. The tone is flat and it's a bit underexposed. Generally, for shots like this, leave some room in front of the moving object for it to travel into. Translated, that means that it's too centered.

It's too bad you couldn't wait for wheels up, which would have made a more dramatic shot. But the plane was probably at a distance by that time. As it is, it's not a noteworthy shot, unless someone dear was on the flight.


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Jun 22, 2009 15:48 |  #3

Some hints on post processing in here:
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Jun 23, 2009 03:57 as a reply to  @ PhotosGuy's post |  #4

Thanks will take a look




  
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